DivineSkyDragonOsiris Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 [img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/6131/437331g.jpg[/img] Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters This card cannot attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, when this card destroys an opponent's monster in Battle, it can attack again. When this card battles a Level 8 or higher monster, decrease thhat monster's ATK by 1000 during the Damage Step only. When this card leaves the the field: Banish it. Then, you can select, and Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 I would say that Stardust and Scrap Dragon is outclassed this. But for the better card : make it Level 7, with no need dragon as it materials. generic prefer, The rest effects is fine for me, though -2 seems bit not advantaging nowadays Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineSkyDragonOsiris Posted September 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1315926790' post='5512175'] I would say that Stardust and Scrap Dragon is outclassed this. But for the better card : make it Level 7, with no need dragon as it materials. generic prefer, The rest effects is fine for me, though -2 seems bit not advantaging nowadays [/quote] Ok, i edited it. Do you have any advice esle to give me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Did you post the new card? It is still level 8. If don't, post it. I want to see the changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tlwfapjrs Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 the double attack is nice... the level 8 or higher effect is meh.. bein able to special summon dragon from graveyard is nice too.. solid synchro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineSkyDragonOsiris Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 [quote name='pimp_7' timestamp='1315937992' post='5512400'] Did you post the new card? It is still level 8. If don't, post it. I want to see the changes [/quote] I edited it. I added more effects, but I want to keep it a Lv 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 [quote name='DivineSkyDragonOsiris' timestamp='1315977003' post='5513834'] I edited it. I added more effects, but I want to keep it a Lv 8 [/quote] which is a good idea because lv8s have more support anyways though if you make it attack again, you may want to say the attack cannot be a DIRECT attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineSkyDragonOsiris Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1315986164' post='5513973'] which is a good idea because lv8s have more support anyways though if you make it attack again, you may want to say the attack cannot be a DIRECT attack [/quote] And fixed again. Anything else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 [quote name='DivineSkyDragonOsiris' timestamp='1315927777' post='5512189'] Ok, i edited it. Do you have any advice esle to give me? [/quote] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monsters [s]This card cannot attack your opponent directly.[/s] Once per turn, when this card destroys an opponent's monster [b]by[/b] [b]b[/b]attle: It can attack [b]once[/b] again. When this card battles a Level 8 or higher monster[b]: D[/b]ecrease that monster's ATK by 1000 during the Damage Step only. When this card leaves the the field: You can banish this card [b]and 1 card in your hand[/b]; Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard. Make it level 7, with 2600 ATKish. Would make this balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DivineSkyDragonOsiris Posted September 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 First, there is nothing wrong with "This card destroys an opponent's monster [b]in[/b] battle" ("monster is destroyed [b]by[/b] battle"). And if you have already said "Once per turn", then you dont need to put the "once" before the again. Second, I think that if this card has already required a Dragon-Type Tuner to Synchro, then you only need to banish it to ss a Dragon-Type from your Graveyard. And last but not not least, almost all mutiply attackers have the line: "This card cannot attack your opponent directly", except some like BLS or Hayabusa Knight. So I think this card should have this effect to limit its power. Just my ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 Dragons have enough lvl 8 synchros and only 3 lvl 7s. BRD is always decent, but Ancient Fairy and Exploder are lackluster. If anything, make this lvl 7 only because it would actually see more play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 14, 2011 Report Share Posted September 14, 2011 Actually, I'd let it attack directly and just say "When this monster destroys another monster in battle; It can attack one other monster your opponent controls immediately", that way it isn't lackluster but still can't just field wipe then direct attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 15, 2011 Report Share Posted September 15, 2011 [quote name='DivineSkyDragonOsiris' timestamp='1316014592' post='5514335'] And fixed again. Anything else? [/quote] it's good enough, I'll give you 9.2/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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