Oniningan

[Just Crouton]

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[b]Oniningen[/b]
2 Level 4 Monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; Choose 1 Level 5 or lower Fiend-Type monster from your Deck with ATK equal to or less than the target monster's ATK and Special Summon it. Then, make the target monster's ATK and DEF 0 (Permanently).

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[color=#ff8c00][b]Raging Oni[/b][/color]
Any monster that is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field is changed to Defense Position. Once per turn: When a monster your opponent controls is switched from face-up Defense Position to face-up Attack Position: Draw 1 card.

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[color=#ff8c00][b]Bushioni[/b][/color]
When this card battles: Your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards during damage calculation. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster: Destroy that monster without flipping it face-up or damage calculation. If it is a Flip Effect Monster: Banish all monsters with the same name from your opponent's Deck.

[ragnarok1945]

for the XYZ monster, if you're going to drop the monster's stats to 0/0, then maybe you might want to be a bit more specific about the monster

for Raging Oni, the draw power is good and yes it's adequate since it's once per turn. Still, you should have said when your opponent changes the position via a card effect

[Just Crouton]

bump

[TwinSeed]

Oniningen: The only OCG error is in the last line, "[s]Then[/s] The targeted monster's ATK and DEF become 0 until the end of the duel." Other than that, it's gotta nice picture, interesting name, strange effect.

Raging Oni: First of all, I love how the name and picture match. Second, the OCG's good. Third, isn't it just a tad over-powered?

Bushioni: I suggest making this a level 5. For OCG "Destroy that monster without flipping it face-up or [b]applying[/b] damage calculation. If the destroyed monster is a Flip Effect Monster..." Overall, I like this card.

[Just Crouton]

BUMP

[Therrion]

[center][center]I like the first card, very good for quick Synchro's/Xyz. Also sets graveyard for any Fiend monsters (but they don't tend to like graveyard, so theres nothing OP about it )[/center][/center]
[center][center]Raging Oni...I love it! Very very nice card and goes farther then just beating down, though it may draw ALOT of cards due to things not being able to attack the turn their Special Summoned, so it may be unfair, especially with good backrow support. Perhaps make it have a time limit on field or draw limit of 2 cards.[/center][/center]
[center][center]Ancient Gear + Mystic Swordsmen + Nobleman of Crossout = This sneaky bastard. Would hurt Ryko and Tomato's (etc.)[/center][/center]