The Elementals masters.

[gimmepie]

You didn't make it an archetype, you made it a type. Archetypes are a common part of a card name or a set of cards that go together and types are like Beat, Warrior, Dragon etc... I think that 1-2 perfect elementals may be OK but you shouldn't push the idea further.

[raaabr]

Thanks for the comments. I never expected this many ratings ,

[ragnarok1945]

problem with your Consumer of Worlds is that it's way too easy to rid it off the field, it's why you should give another effect for it

[raaabr]

Remake of consumer of worlds:


[img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/9977/25039t.jpg[/img]


lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except for by the effect of "Elemental Supernova!". Once per turn, during your end phase, banish from your hand or field one "Advanced Elemental". If you cannot, banish this card. This card cannot be selected as a attack target.

[ragnarok1945]

Well the last effect isn't really too necessary

there aren't many cards that can hold up to 4500 atk anyway

[raaabr]

I'm editing it now. Still, I think that the effect is suiting. Its a black hole, and so it is all consuming. I'll still try your idea, though.

Edit of a edit: I'm done.

Edit of a edit of a edit: Anyone has ideas for any possible card names/improvements? I've got Yugioh card maker block right now.

[raaabr]

Finally got past that pesky yugioh card maker block.

Here:

[img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/2164/25039.jpg[/img]

[ragnarok1945]

well this isn't too likely to be pulled off much, since most of the duel you'd only have 1-3 cards in your hand anyway

I'm curious where you're going with this in doubling your opponent's atk though

[gimmepie]

I think it's just done as a cost...

[raaabr]

Yeah. The "Plague" Is like a disease that enhances the monsters strength, then destroys it. Look at Plague wolf.

[raaabr]

Quick question to all those of you who are reading this topic:

Should i keep the high attack cost for Morbus longer, completely scrap the original idea and start fresh, or keep it the same?

[gimmepie]

For Morbus ditch the discard part or lessen it significantly. Otherwise I like it the way it is.

[raaabr]

Thanks! I'll get to editing it right away!


Edit: Here it is!

[img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1303/25039m.jpg[/img]



Edit of a Edit: Any ideas for a released form?

[gimmepie]

Creator of Pandemics (or epidemics)?

[raaabr]

Thanks for the idea, but don't blame me if, when it comes out, you almost lose your lunch. I have already chosen the picture, and i have to warn you beforehand.

Warning: Do not look if you have a weak stomach:





[img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/2164/25039.jpg[/img]



Lore:This card cannot be normal summoned or set, This card cannot be special summoned except by the effect of "Elemental Release!". Once per turn, after this card destroys a monster, you can discard one card to put one "Pestilence counter" (Max one) on each monster with lower attack than the destroyed monster. 3 turns after the activation of this effect, you can banish one card from your graveyard to destroy all monsters on the field.

[gimmepie]

Hidden Effect: May cause opponent to throw up.

[raaabr]

Look at it. It's already posted. Its hideous.

[gimmepie]

I like it.

You need to specify that only the cards with the counter will be destroyed otherwise it's both OP'd and the counter effect would be useless.

[raaabr]

I'm SERIOUSLY starting to regret making that card. Every time I look at it, it reminds me of my brother. And i always feel queasy looking at it. And It will give me nightmares.
Edit: So hairy....and [i]slimy.....and scary......and ugly.....[/i]
Here is the remake.





[img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/2164/25039.jpg[/img]


Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set, This card cannot be special summoned except by the effect of "Elemental Release!". Once per turn, after this card destroys a monster, you can discard one card to put one "Pestilence counter" (Max one) on each monster with lower attack than the destroyed monster. 3 turns after the activation of this effect, you can banish one card from your graveyard to destroy all monsters on the field with Pestilence counters.

[gimmepie]

Better.

It reminds you of your brother?

[raaabr]

Yeah..... Enough said.

Correction: Not enough said.


Not going into personal info too much here, but they are both rude, and nasty.

[gimmepie]

Got it.

[raaabr]

Mmmm...... As they are now, what type of deck/card type would you say they are? (For example, a beatdown deck.)

[gimmepie]

I have absolutely no idea. There all quite different from each other.

[raaabr]

The question is: Do they work well together?