K.B. strategist Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 [center][center][img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/2219/55952.jpg[/img][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][quote=Effect:]You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If you do this, you cannot Normal Summon or Set this turn and this card returns to your hand at the End Phase. If this card is Normal Summoned: Halve its ATK. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card attacks a face-up monster with DEF less than or equal to this card's ATK: You can destroy that card with this card's effect before Damage Calculation. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard by an opponent's card effect: You can return this card to its owner's hand instead. If you do, the ATK of this card becomes 1000 when it is Summoned. [/quote] [/center][/center] [center][center]This is a card that I originally made way back in 2008, and I don't believe it ever got posted. It's effect has seen numerous changes but it still has the same basic idea behind it. What do you think? Does the last effect clash too much with the others?[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 19, 2011 Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 so it'll drop to 1000 then attacking your opponent you only do 500 damage, that's very little special summoned makes it like a spirit monster characteristics to an extent, somewhat wierd I'll give you 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1316474680' post='5527067'] so it'll drop to 1000 then attacking your opponent you only do 500 damage, that's very little [/quote] That's true, however, the main point of the card is more for the monster removal. Take out 1 monster per turn with 2000 or less defense. Attacking directly is just another option to use - it fits the theme of lightning, I'd say. Perhaps I should upgrade the damage to make it a more viable option though. Otherwise I might just remove it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted September 20, 2011 Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 Lol at the Archon Picture And yeah I kind of agree with Rag..Low attack :/ .. I think you put waaay to much drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 Ok, I removed the part about halving the attack if it attacks directly. Also what did you say this pic is from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 20, 2011 Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If you do this, you cannot [s]conduct your[/s] Normal Summon or Set this turn and this card returns to your hand at the End Phase. If this card is Normal Summoned: Halve its ATK. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Halve the damage to your opponent would receive. If this card attacks a face-up monster with DEF less than or equal to this card's ATK: You can destroy that card with this card's effect before Damage Calculation. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard by an opponent's card effect: You can return this card to its owner's hand instead. If you do, the ATK of this card becomes 1000 when it is Summoned. Pretty decent. But not impressive, keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 20, 2011 Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 [quote name='K.B. strategist' timestamp='1316480302' post='5527361'] That's true, however, the main point of the card is more for the monster removal. Take out 1 monster per turn with 2000 or less defense. Attacking directly is just another option to use - it fits the theme of lightning, I'd say. Perhaps I should upgrade the damage to make it a more viable option though. Otherwise I might just remove it. [/quote] yeah make the drain up to 1000 or something 500 is too weak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted September 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 bump. Also, thanks for the OCG fix, Syns. I don't own any new cards so the wording changes are still unfamiliar to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted September 20, 2011 Report Share Posted September 20, 2011 Kay, my review. First things first, it's a bit too OP IMO. You'd most likely be Special Summoning it, since there's no point in the Normal Summon, so it pretty much deals 2000 dmg every turn for the cost of a Normal Summon. It's pseudo-spirit, so it doesn't get destroyed. In short, it kills the other guy in 4 turns. That's not really much of a matter here, though; most decks can do that without this. The part I'm concerned about is that this becomes an alternate win condition for Final Countdown. In short, it's like this. Step 1, search this out. Step 2, get this out for 2000 dmg every turn, and run lots of stuff like Threatning Roar and Thunder of Ruler and Waboku so that you take no damage. After 4 turns, you win, unless something went wrong. So IMO, you should make its direct attack ability only activate when it's Normal Summoned. And it should only lower to 1500 in that case, not 1000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 ^hes right but Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
インフェルニティ・ミラージュ Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 [quote name='K.B. strategist' timestamp='1316463094' post='5526533'] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/2219/55952.jpg[/img] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center]This is a card that I originally made way back in 2008, and I don't believe it ever got posted. It's effect has seen numerous changes but it still has the same basic idea behind it. What do you think? Does the last effect clash too much with the others? [/quote] This card would be a great Spirit monster. =D[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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