·Toot Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 [center][center][img]http://i1024.photobucket.com/albums/y308/Toot4/archonwhistler.png[/img][/center][/center] [center][center][quote][color=#008080]When this card is Normal Summoned; you can add 1 Continuous Trap Card in your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is sent to the Graveyard; you can Special Summon 1 "Archon Tootler" from your Deck or Graveyard.[/color][/quote][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][IMG]http://i1024.photobucket.com/albums/y308/Toot4/archontootler-1.png[/IMG][/center][/center] [center][center][quote][color=#008080]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Archon Whistler". This card cannot be targeted for an attack. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points: Add 1 Trap Card from your Deck to your hand. This card gains 500 ATK for each face-up Continuous Trap Card. You can send 2 face-up Continuous Trap Cards you control to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position.[/color][/quote][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][color=#ff0000]How Are They?[/color][/center][/center] [center][center][color=#afeeee]OCG Fixes Highly Appreciated.[/color][/center][/center] [center][center][color=#daa520]I Give Reps For Constructive Feedback.[/color][/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 The first 1 is very good. (I personally like him). The second 1 seem a bit Oped since by paying 500 Life points you can add to your hand Mirror force, Bottomless trap hole etc. I would suggest you to say that it can add only continuous traps. As a combination they seem very good. 9 /10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 [quote name='groniack' timestamp='1316712700' post='5532876'] The first 1 is very good. (I personally like him). The second 1 seem a bit Oped since by paying 500 Life points you can add to your hand Mirror force, Bottomless trap hole etc. I would suggest you to say that it can add only continuous traps. As a combination they seem very good. 9 /10 good job [/quote] i was thinking of making it only search continuous traps... but it seemed kinda boring to me xD thnx for the FB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 well Tootler is a bit weak, kind of hoped it'd have more than just 0/0 stats still, 500 LP for ANY trap added to your hand seems a bit too much, maybe make it more of a specific trap? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1316740334' post='5533758'] well Tootler is a bit weak, kind of hoped it'd have more than just 0/0 stats still, 500 LP for ANY trap added to your hand seems a bit too much, maybe make it more of a specific trap? [/quote] lol i didn't think of any specific traps... unless you mean like just continuous traps like it was said above xD his original atk and def was 1850 / 1200 I accidently uploaded the wrong pic so... yeah lol xD I was too lazy to upload the original lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 yeah at those stats that would have made it last longer on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 lol xD thnx for the FB man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 just let us know when you change the stats, or are you simply going to keep it at 0/0? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 nah... i will probably upload the pic a little later... actually... imma do it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 very well, then for the 2nd card I'll give it a rate of 9.3/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 thnx man... lol the card is posted xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 also you shouldn't have selected such backgrounds they kind of made the stats and type of monster on the card a bit hard to see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 I know... it also screws up some of tootler's effect... but i didn't care since i like the way it looks so much xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 it's true lucky for you that we can still read the type and stats, so you didn't have to write that out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 lol yeah ^^ lol and i made the thing i guess i can go and fix it... but i'm not sure if it will turn out the same xD... ahh well it'l be worth it xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 @Original Poster: I like these cards and are really good, I like te template, but if you use gimp, you could use the opacity in the layer box to make it transparent........ well, keep it up and hope you do good..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 lol thnx for the FB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☼◄Firewolf►☼ Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 [color=#00FF00][i]Wow the card you made are really awesome, i give you a 9.7 for the cards!:--)[/i][/color] [color=#FF0000][b]Why not a 10 if the cards are awesome?[/b][/color] [color=#FFA500][i]Because the text on your cards are sometimes hard to read....;--)[/i][/color] [color=#FFA500][i]The card template is awesome but maybe you can remove the music notes by the text...:--)[/i][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 lol i like how you did that... thnx for the FB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☼◄Firewolf►☼ Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 [b][color=#ff0000]H[/color][color=#008000]a[/color][color=#00ffff]h[/color][color=#800080]a[/color][color=#800000],[/color][color=#ff0000] [/color][color=#ff8c00]y[/color][/b][b][color=#00FF00]o[/color][/b][color=#0000ff][b]u[/b][/color][b][color=#800080]r[/color][color=#ff8c00] [/color][color=#ee82ee]w[/color][color=#008080]e[/color][color=#00ffff]l[/color][color=#800000]c[/color][color=#ff0000]o[/color][color=#b22222]m[/color][color=#ffa500]e[/color][color=#006400].[/color][color=#daa520]:[/color][color=#ff0000]-[/color][color=#0000cd]-[/color][color=#00ff00])[/color][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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