UltraLegend Posted September 22, 2011 Report Share Posted September 22, 2011 If this card is in the wrong topic, please tell me [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/3610/435344.jpg[/img] [img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/3610/435344.jpg[/img] Please give your opinion. More cards soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akos Creator Posted September 24, 2011 Report Share Posted September 24, 2011 wow cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NumberCruncher Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 Drop the "However" in the card text and phase the last effect "and send the top 3 cards of their Deck to the grave", and you should be good to go. And yes. This is the right section for this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorin Markov Posted September 27, 2011 Report Share Posted September 27, 2011 not bad for a noob but here's your lore fixed Lore: If this card is destroyed [b]by battle[/b], Special Summon this card from your Graveyard on your next Standby Phase. [b]If this card is Special Summon by its own effect[/b][i],[/i] both players lose 800 Life Points, and must [s]discard[/s] [b]send[/b] the top three cards of their deck [b]to the Graveyard[/b]. Bold is what i added to it and the Strike outs is what i took out. Not bad, I'll give it a 8.5/10 Next post your lore (Effect), its make it a lot easier to fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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