Tefached Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 [align=center]I was bored, so i made some union monsters little hard to read but credit properly given Sliferdragon Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to your "Midnight Dragon" as an Equip Spell Card OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, each time the equipped monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, destroy 2 face-up Spell or Trap Card on the field. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) Reek Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to your "Phoenix Dragon" as an Equip Spell Card OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, each time the equipped monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, destroy 2 face-up Spell or Trap Card on the field. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) Dysfuctional Dragons"Phoenix Dragon" + "Midnight Dragon"This card can only be Special Summoned from your Fusion Deck by removing from play the above cards you control (You do not use "Polymerization"). Once per turn, remove from play 1 card your opponent controls. When this card attacks, you can change the battle position of the attack target. (Flip Effects are not activated at this time.) [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 [sorry for the double,but fusion added] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Phœnix DragonHarsh Grading Mode: 60%Normal Grading Mode: 75%Merciful Grading Mode: 7.9/10Errors: It should read, "Spell and Trap Cards." That's the nitpicky part. I don't like the title. It should be something like, "Crystal Dragon," or something along those lines. Also, when it's equipped to "Midnight Dragon," after the bit about 2 S/T cards being destroyed, you ought to add in, "If you cannot, negate the attack." That way it's less broken. Midnight DragonHarsh Grading Mode: 60%Normal Grading Mode: 71%Merciful Grading Mode: 8.2/10Errors: I like this card, but I don't think it should be a Union monster. Change it to be a Normal Monster, or give it some other cool effect. It's just weird if you can equip them to each other. Hell's DragonHarsh Grading Mode: 56%Normal Grading Mode: 79%Merciful Grading Mode: 7.4/10.0Errors: Waaay too overpowered. Take out the bit about removing monsters from play and you're gold. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 it effect is edited off of freezing and burning beast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 The effects are about perfect, but the pictures could improve. They could be a little more... uniquely chosen... :/Even though the idea of these cards are excellent, just put in a little more effort when making more cards, so that the quality can be extremely visible. Again, great job. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Some minor OCG errors. The biggest problem I can see is that the ATK stats are WAY too high. (2400 for a Level 4 with no negative effect? 2800 for a Level 6 with no negative effect?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 i see your point ill fix em later mainly because im going to make a whole union set of not just dragons. thanks for your help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Yeah, mini OCG errors, and massive overpoweredness. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 Wait... Phœnix Dragon is only LvIV?! I thought it was LvV or LvVI... Change that, and make Midnight Dragon LvVII or LvVIII. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 I more or less agree with all those above me, cards are not bad at all ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 yea i know unfortually i didnt save them in the card maker so i have to make them completly over again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohman13 Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 the pic you used for Phoenix Dragon is way over used.iv used it before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted February 16, 2008 Report Share Posted February 16, 2008 WAAY too powerful... Bring the levels up a bit, and put some restrictions in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted March 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 thanks ill edit and fix them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Now I dont get why youd want to bother equipping the stronger monster to the weaker monster when they have the same exact effect anyways... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Golden Alchemist Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Cool cards but a union monster doesn't have the word "Effect" on it, which was what I was trying to explain on my other topic the day I came here. Thats why I suggested that the card maker have the union option added. How its set up now keeps the card from looking authentic. Unless they changed it since the last time I bought a pack of cards. Last time I bought a pack was when Strike of Neos came out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Some minor OCG errors. The biggest problem I can see is that the ATK stats are WAY too high. (2400 for a Level 4 with no negative effect? 2800 for a Level 6 with no negative effect?) I Agree with Crab Helmet. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted March 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 thx moderatorand Golden dude uummm i wasnt online when you joined so umm...yea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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