gimmepie Posted September 25, 2011 Report Share Posted September 25, 2011 [img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: Banish a FIRE monster in order to deal its attack points as damage to your opponents LP. [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2557/490484u.jpg[/img] Effect: Special summon a FIRE monster from your graveyard as long as it's attack is 2500 or below. If the selected monster's attack is less than 1500 deal 400 points of direct damage to your opponent. [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: During your battle phase you may deal 1200 points of damage to your opponent. If you use this effect you may not attack and must switch this card to the defence position. [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card destroys a monster on your opponents side of the field your opponent take 600 points of additional damage. [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: This card is also treated as a FIRE monster. When this card is destroyed in battle your opponent takes life point damage equal to the damage you take. [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is used to sycnhro summon a FIRE or DARK monster deal 500 points of damage to your opponent. If this card is used to synchro summon a monster who is not of these attributes the owner of this card takes 200 points of damage. [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 DARK or FIRE Tuner + Darkflame Swordsman When this card destroys an opponents monster deal 600 points of direct damage to your opponent's life points. When this card is destroyed your opponent takes 100 points of damage for every FIRE or DARK monster on the field. [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/3630/490484p.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is summoned deal 200 points of damage to your opponent for every card on the field. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/5426/490484e.jpg[/img] Effect: When using this card as part of a synchro summon you can count it's level as four. [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When your opponent activates a spell or trap card that deals direct damage to your life points negate the card and destroy it, your opponent then takes life point damage equal to the damage you would have received. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: Equip this to a warrior monster that is either FIRE or DARK attributed. Increase the equipped monsters attack by 600 points. When this card is destroyed deal 300 points of damage to your opponent. [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9408/490484l.jpg[/img] Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can be special summoned by tributing two FIRE or DARK monsters on the field with a combined level equal to or higher than this cards. Whilst this card remains face up on the field your opponent takes 400 life point damage on their end phase. When this card destroys a defence position monster your opponent takes 700 points of life point damage. [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is summoned your opponent takes 1000 points of LP damage. This card counts as two tributes when tributed to special summon "Darkflame Master". [img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/2117/490484s.jpg[/img] Effect: Negate the effect of a spell or trap and destroy it. If the destroyed card targeted a FIRE or DARK monster on your side of the field deal 500 points of damage to your opponents LP. [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/4093/490484o.jpg[/img] Effects: Whilst this card remains face-up on the field your opponent must pay 300 life points in order to target a monster on your side of the field for attack with a monster that is not of the FIRE attribute. [img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/4641/490484g.jpg[/img] Effects: Equip this card to a "Darkflame" monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys an opponents monster your opponents takes an additional 500 points of damage. [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/1446/490484h.jpg[/img] Effect: Tribute this card to special summon a monster with "Darkfire" or "Darkflame" in it's name with 2000 ATK or less. [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: Destroy all monsters on the field, your opponent takes damage equal to the number of FIRE and DARK monsters destroyed X200. If this card is negated by a card effect your opponent takes 800 points of life point damage. [img]http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/5426/490484e.jpg[/img] Effect: Your opponent must pay 500 life points to activate a spell or trap card as long as this card remains face-up on the field. [img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/1446/490484h.jpg[/img] Effect: When ever a FIRE or DARK monster is destroyed your opponent loses life points equal to the destroyed monsters level X200. [img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is destroyed your opponent takes 200 damage for each DARK or FIRE monster in your graveyard. When this card is targeted by a card effect negate the card effect and deal 600 points of damage to your opponent. [img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 DARK or FIRE Tuner+Darkflame Crusader This card cannot attack directly and cannot be equipped with another card. When this card is selected as a target for an attack or selects an opponents monster for an attack your opponent loses 1000 life points. [img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/788/490484r.jpg[/img] Effect: When ever your opponent summons a monster they lose life points equal to the summoned monsters level X200. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent your opponent takes 600points of life point damage. [img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: Whilst this card remains face-up on the field when ever you take life point damage your opponent takes damage equal to what you recieved. [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Your opponent recieves damage equal to battle damage you receive from a battle involving this card. When this card is sent to the graveyard remove it from play. Please review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 25, 2011 Report Share Posted September 25, 2011 Arson could get OPed, you may need to add a drawback so it's not a OTK set up Lady of Darkflame you could raise the burn higher, right now it's not likely to exceed 700 burn or anything 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raaabr Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 Wow. Just wow. I'm impressed (Like with most of your work) with the concept, and the fact that most of the effects are not OPed (Though arson needs some work. Maybe give it a drawback like make the tributed monster banished, or you take half or a 1/4 of the damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panda^.^ Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 9.9/10 reason? everything else is great i personally dont like Synchros, Fusion, XYZ<<<i hate Xyz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 Arson: Tribute is now banish Lady of Darkflame: Burn upped to 200. @raaabr: Good idea to change it to banish, that way it's less OP and stays true to the card. @ragnarok: Thanks for pointing those issues out. @Jack: That's my highest number rating yet. I don't mind fusions or synchros but I don't like xyz I don't get them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 yeah now for Lady of Darkflame the burn is reasonable and I can give you 8.8/10 for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 Awesome. Any other suggestions for improving the set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raaabr Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 You need something with lasting power. Like the solar flare dragon combo. Otherwise you could be a easy target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 Will get on that soon. New cards added: Darkflame Master and Darkflame Beast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 26, 2011 Report Share Posted September 26, 2011 with Master you can make the 200 burn during the end phase higher at 200 is virtually negligible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2011 Edit: Masters effect changed. New Cards Added: Revenge of the Darkest Flame, Darkflame Restraint and Dark Burning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 27, 2011 Report Share Posted September 27, 2011 Revenge you can make the burn higher, 400 burn isn't much Dark burning's 300 extra damage also isn't much, you can make it 500 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted September 27, 2011 Report Share Posted September 27, 2011 Nice work. I think the concept is pretty interesting and they seem like they could be used to make a decent deck. I'm pretty sure you do have some OCG errors for some things, but the cards are still understanable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2011 @Ragnarok, I have little to now experience with burn decks so thanks for the help, I'll get on that. @IceDorago, Thanks for the input, I'm glad you can see a function for them. I'm certain that I have OCG errors I'm useless at OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raaabr Posted September 27, 2011 Report Share Posted September 27, 2011 Note: If you mix this with a lockdown deck (Like your otherworld set) then you have the workings of a masterpiece. Also, maybe make it so that for darkflame restraint, only Non-fire attribute monsters have to pay 300 life points to attack. that way it is less OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2011 Good idea Suggestions have been edited in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raaabr Posted September 27, 2011 Report Share Posted September 27, 2011 Oh and also: Is Darkflame troll meant to be dark attribute? or fire attribute? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IceDorago Posted September 28, 2011 Report Share Posted September 28, 2011 [quote name='raaabr' timestamp='1317167268' post='5544591'] Oh and also: Is Darkflame troll meant to be dark attribute? or fire attribute? [/quote] Kinda like Light and Darkness, it's supposed to eb double attributed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raaabr Posted September 28, 2011 Report Share Posted September 28, 2011 Oh. My bad. I didn't read the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 28, 2011 Report Share Posted September 28, 2011 [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1317123294' post='5543420'] Good idea Suggestions have been edited in. [/quote] good, I can give Revenge 8.5/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2011 That's good and sorry for the typo where "now" is meant to say "no". This set is built to work well in collaboration with DARK cards and will have some some DARK even though it is primarily FIRE. So yes Troll is supposed to be DARK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raaabr Posted September 28, 2011 Report Share Posted September 28, 2011 Thanks for the clarification! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted September 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2011 No problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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