raaabr Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 0_0. Wow. Thats a lot of bumps. Anyway, like deployer, and the artwork in general is good to, except for pyro combiner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 Thanks, sorry about combiner best I could do for the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 New Card Added: Rain of Darkflame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Tigerwolf Posted October 14, 2011 Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 ...Personally I'm a big FIRE fan. I'm gonna hit this archtype full force! [spoiler=My Comments] [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1316972349' post='5539683'] [img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: Banish a FIRE monster in order to deal its attack points as damage to your opponents LP. [b]OPed. How so? Ancient Flamvell Deity, Lava Golem, etc. Deals quite a bit of damage...in short bits of time.[/b] [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2557/490484u.jpg[/img] Effect: Special summon a FIRE monster from your graveyard as long as it's attack is 2500 or below. If the selected monster's attack is less than 1500 deal 400 points of direct damage to your opponent. [b]This card is broken with Flamvell Firedog. It's a free monster reborn, etc. The 400 burn isn't much of a threat, but it's more like icing on a cake.[/b] [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: During your battle phase you may deal 1200 points of damage to your opponent. If you use this effect you may not attack and must switch this card to the defence position. [b]1200 burn, during your battle phase. Okay, this card seems interesting, and frankly it doesn't look OPed, so this one is good.[/b] [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card destroys a monster on your opponents side of the field your opponent take 600 points of additional damage. [b]Not OPed at all. It's just an 1800 ATK monster with additional burn. Hardly worth running though since it can only trample over so many monsters :/[/b] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: This card is also treated as a FIRE monster. When this card is destroyed in battle your opponent takes life point damage equal to the damage you take. [b]Nice card. Basically another "Reflect Bounder" except its FIRE and DARK.[/b] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is used to sycnhro summon a FIRE or DARK monster deal 500 points of damage to your opponent. If this card is used to synchro summon a monster who is not of these attributes the owner of this card takes 200 points of damage. [b]The 200 burn just isn't necessary. :/ It's hardly noticeable actually. Good tuner, but you were trying to give it a backfire that really isn't a backfire, and tbh, Rose, Warrior of Revenge somewhat outclasses this card.[/b] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: 1 DARK or FIRE Tuner + Darkflame Swordsman When this card destroys an opponents monster deal 600 points of direct damage to your opponent's life points. When this card is destroyed your opponent takes 100 points of damage for every FIRE or DARK monster on the field.\ [b]Okay, this is pretty simple. Unfortunately...I'd rather [/b][b]go into something different. Black Rose Dragon, or Laval Stannon are actually somewhat better options than this guy, even Ancient Fairy Dragon to some extent.[/b] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/3630/490484p.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is summoned deal 200 points of damage to your opponent for every card on the field. [b]...I worry this card might be abused nasty...I mean, it can deal anywhere between 200 to 4200 damage...And Inferno Reckless Summon will wreak with this card...[/b] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/5426/490484e.jpg[/img] Effect: When using this card as part of a synchro summon you can count it's level as four. [b]Pretty decent. Nothing out of the ordinary here except a level adjuster.[/b] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When your opponent activates a spell or trap card that deals direct damage to your life points negate the card and destroy it, your opponent then takes life point damage equal to the damage you would have received. [b]Situational as is. [/b][b]Not only that...but Spell and Traps deal "Effect Damage" not "Direct Damage". TBH, not even worth running in a deck, even as a counter.[/b] [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: Equip this to a warrior monster that is either FIRE or DARK attributed. Increase the equipped monsters attack by 600 points. When this card is destroyed deal 300 points of damage to your opponent. [b]Simple burn. Simple ATK increase. Nothing worth running actually :/ The damage is too minimal and ATK increase isn't enough. Quite UPed if you ask me.[/b] [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9408/490484l.jpg[/img] Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can be special summoned by tributing two FIRE or DARK monsters on the field with a combined level equal to or higher than this cards. Whilst this card remains face up on the field your opponent takes 400 life point damage on their end phase. When this card destroys a defence position monster your opponent takes 700 points of life point damage. [b]Not bad. A Powerbeater with double burn effects. Not OPed, but rather nice. I'm thinking it's ATK "should" be 3000 though...but that's just me.[/b] [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is summoned your opponent takes 1000 points of LP damage. This card counts as two tributes when tributed to special summon "Darkflame Master". [b]Burn, Tribute, Burn. Not bad.[/b] [img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/2117/490484s.jpg[/img] Effect: Negate the effect of a spell or trap and destroy it. If the destroyed card targeted a FIRE or DARK monster on your side of the field deal 500 points of damage to your opponents LP. [b]Somewhat broken. Dark Bribe lets your opponent draw 1 card for a reason. This card has NO drawbacks or costs, and actually has a "benefit" effect.[/b] [img]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/4093/490484o.jpg[/img] Effects: Whilst this card remains face-up on the field your opponent must pay 300 life points in order to target a monster on your side of the field for attack with a monster that is not of the FIRE attribute. [b]...Meh. 300 per attack isn't gonna kill anyone too quickly, and this card can be MSTed. Not OPed, but not worthing runing either :/[/b] [img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/4641/490484g.jpg[/img] Effects: Equip this card to a "Darkflame" monster. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys an opponents monster your opponents takes an additional 500 points of damage. [b]Additional burn, without much ATK/DEF gain = Another card tht isn't worth running :/ United We Stand/Mage Power/Megamorph...quickly outclass this card.[/b] [img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/2117/490484s.jpg[/img] Effect: Tribute this card to special summon a monster with "Darkfire" in it's name with 2000 ATK or less. [b]This card is okay....If it had "Darkfire" in its name, and so far only "Darkfire Soldier" #1 and #2 along with Darkfire Dragon can use this card.[/b] [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/6504/490484.jpg[/img] Effect: Destroy all monsters on the field, your opponent takes damage equal to the number of FIRE and DARK monsters destroyed X200. If this card is negated by a card effect your opponent takes 800 points of life point damage. [b]Dark Hole with a burn effect for either player. Interesting card with backfire.[/b] [/quote] [/spoiler] Rate: 6.7/10 :/ One thing that did bother me were the OCG errors. It made some of the cards hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Rain of Darkflame reminds me slightly of Torrential Tribute for nuking the whole field, but it has the burn damage to it overall it should be balanced since it's not likely the burn can reach above the 1000 mark too often Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Thanks for the comments. Deployer was my bad it should say Darkflame. I will probs make some adjustments to these cards soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 how many more cards you have planned for the whole archetype? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 I'm honestly not sure, I make them as they come to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 Deployer is fixed and Djinn added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developous Posted October 20, 2011 Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 Rain of Darkflame - A boost on the dark hole. Add a cost of some kind to it. Perhaps discard a card to use it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 20, 2011 Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 well 500 LP cost isn't anything new it's not even that high a price, burn will be minor to force it off, so it's good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2011 Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2011 New Cards: Darkflame Avenger and Darkflame Fearfyre Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 27, 2011 Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 so Crusader you can burn your opponent easily since you can make it work for your own cards too Fearfyre is a bit meh for just 1000 burn, not exactly powerful for a synchro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 Not exactly week either. Was the feedback on crusader good or bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 27, 2011 Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 it was good for Crusader, you did really well for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 awesome, thanks for the clarification and the review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 27, 2011 Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 no problem, just let us know when the next addition to this archetype will be here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 New Card: Brutaa of The Darkflame Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 27, 2011 Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 personally for that one I really don't see the point of the additional 600 damage, your opponent will be burned enough already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2011 I'll consider getting rid of it, although if it doesn't OP it why bother getting rid of it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 28, 2011 Report Share Posted October 28, 2011 it really depends I guess I mean 600 burn ALONE is little, but still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2011 Might as well leave it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 28, 2011 Report Share Posted October 28, 2011 all right, I'll respect that decision Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.P3 Posted October 28, 2011 Report Share Posted October 28, 2011 What's been said has been said, I find it dull if I'm honest; as far as I can see this is a Suicidal type effect. Card Destroyed = Damage to Life Points Even though I find it dull, I like the concept with some better imagery on some cards this could be very successful with the guidance and with the help of others. Good job nether the less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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