The Broken Core [Halycore cards]

[veronanthem]

The "Halycore" will be a series of DARK Fiend and Fairy-type monsters whose effects are activated by lowering the monster's ATK and DEF. All of the Synchros require a Tuner of the opposite type, and non-tuners of the same type. Most of the Fiends focus on swarming, destruction, and inflicting damage. Most of the Fairies focus on increasing other monsters ATK and DEF at the cost of their own.

This is all I currently have. I know there is probably some OCG errors and inconsistencies. Constructive criticism and suggestions are welcome and desired.

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Lore:
1 Fairy-type "Halycore" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fiend type monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned it gains ATK equal to the number of Fiend type monsters in your Grave yard x300 and DEF equal to the number of Fairy-type monsters in your Graveyard x300. Once per turn you may decrease this cards ATK and DEF by 600 to select and Special Summon 1 "Halycore" monster from your Graveyard. Inflict Damage equal to half of the selected monsters ATK to your opponent. You can not use this effect if this card's ATK or Def is lower than 600.


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Lore:
1 Fiend-type "Halycore" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fairy-type monsters
Once per turn, during your opponent's Main Phase 1, you can decrease this card's ATK by 1500 until their next Standby Phase. If you do, during your Draw Phase, draw 3 cards instead of 1. Once per turn, you can decrease this card'd ATK and DEF by 1000 to select and increase the ATK and DEF of 1 "Halycore" monster you control by 750. The selected monster cannot use its effect until your next turn.

Name:Halycore Vengeance
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Lore:
1 Fairy-type "Halycore" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fiend-type monsters
Once per turn you can decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 650 to Special Summon 1 "Halycore" monster that was destroyed in battle by your opponent's attacking monster.

Name:Halycore Forgiveness
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Lore:
1 Fiend-type "Halycore" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fairy-type monsters
Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 900 to select Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower "Halycore" monster from your Deck. You can decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 300 to increase the selected monster's ATK and DEF by 500 and negate its effect for the turn.

[ragnarok1945]

for Peace, 3 card draw power is just too much, you should have made it 2

after all, the 1500 atk loss is only temporary, so you can just keep doing it again and again

[veronanthem]

it's during your opponent's main phase, and it doesnt gain the attack until their next standby phase. i had intended for it to be during MP 1 only, so as to make it an easy attack target if you do use it. and the 1000 ATK and DEF loss for its other effect is permanent.

[Astolfo]

For the First 1:

When this card is Synchro Summoned it gains ATK equal to the number of Fiend type monsters in your Grave yard x300 and DEF equal to the number of Fairy-type monsters in your Graveyard x300. Once per turn you may decrease this cards ATK and DEF by 600 to select and Special Summon 1 "Halycore" monster from your Graveyard. Inflict Damage equal to half of the selected monsters ATK to your opponent. You can not use this effect if this card's ATK or Def is lower than 600.

should be phrased like:

When this card is Synchro Summoned it gains ATK equal to the number of Fiend type monsters in your [b]Graveyard[/b] x300 and DEF equal to the number of Fairy-type monsters in your Graveyard x300. Once per turn, you can decrease this cards ATK and DEF by 600 to select and Special Summon 1 "Halycore" monster from your Graveyard. Inflict damage equal to half of the selected monsters ATK to your opponent. [b]This effect is negated if this card's ATK or DEF is lower than 600. [/b]

2nd one:
Once per turn, during your opponent's Main Phase 1, you can decrease this card's ATK by 1500 until their next Standby Phase. If you do, during your Draw Phase, draw 3 cards instead of 1. Once per turn, you can decrease this card'd ATK and DEF by 1000 to select and increase the ATK and DEF of 1 "Halycore" monster you control by 750. The selected monster cannot use its effect until your next turn.

should be phrased like:

Once per turn, during your opponent's Main Phase 1, you can decrease this card's ATK by 1500 until their next Standby Phase. If you do, during your Draw Phase, draw 3 cards instead of 1. Once per turn, you can decrease this [b]card[/b] ATK and DEF by 1000 to select and increase the ATK and DEF of 1 "Halycore" monster you control by 750. The selected [b]monster's effect is negated until your next turn[/b] (Standby Phase? IDK u choose but sb is normal)

3rd:

Once per turn you can decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 650 to Special Summon 1 "Halycore" monster that was destroyed in battle by your opponent's attacking monster.

should be phrased like:

Once per turn you can decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 650 to Special Summon 1 "Halycore" monster that was destroyed [b]by[/b] battle by [b]an [/b]opponent's attacking monster. (Maybe just halycore in grav or destroyed that turn but if u leave same above way is correct)

4th:

Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 900 to select Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower "Halycore" monster from your Deck. You can decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 300 to increase the selected monster's ATK and DEF by 500 and negate its effect for the turn.

should be phrased like:

Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK and DEF of this card by 900 to select Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower "Halycore" monster from your Deck. You can decrease this card's ATK and DEF by 300 to increase the selected monster's ATK and DEF by 500 and negate its effect [b]until the end of the turn. [/b]

maybe for peace drawing less cards, and veng for all haly in grave OR only dest'd that turn? but still great! 9.8/10

[veronanthem]

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