Zero Darkness Posted September 30, 2011 Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 This is my first cards that I make and show so tell me what you think. There`s Fallen Angels and Fallen Knights. [img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/724/443237.jpg[/img] [font=times new roman,times,serif][size=4][size=5]Lore: [size=4]When this card is destoyed by battle and send to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 Fallen Monster from your Graveyard to the field.[/size][/size][/size][/font] [font=times new roman][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/724/443237.jpg[/img][/font] [font=times new roman,times,serif][size=4][size=5][size=4][size=5]Lore[/size]: During your Main Phase, you can discard a card; Special Summon 1 "Fallen monster from your deck. It returns to the hand in the End Phase.[/size][/size][/size][/font] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/724/443237.jpg[/img] [font=times new roman,times,serif][size=5]Lore[/size][/font]: Ryudo always liked the fire, he knows how to burn, but he also knows how to flame off [img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/724/443237.jpg[/img] [font=times new roman,times,serif][size=5]Lore[/size][/font]: The Monster that equip this card is considered as a "Fallen Angel" Monster. If this card is sent to the Graveyard put him at the top of your Deck. This is for now, more will come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted September 30, 2011 Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 Winged Warrior is NOT a type. OCG needs a lot of work. What do you think Fabled are? Effects are all Sub Par 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted September 30, 2011 Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 Gardia OCG fix: "During your Main Phase, you can discard a card; Special Summon 1 "Fallen monster from your deck. It returns to the hand in the End Phase." Cards have a lot of summoning power, pretty good OCG for a newcomer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Darkness Posted September 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 thank you first, but can you tell what type you think the angels should be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted September 30, 2011 Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 First one seems fine, second do what I suggested. Third I'm not sure about. Type would probably be better as Winged-Beast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Darkness Posted September 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 I will change it right nowHere`s a Ritual Monster (I very very love his pic) [img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/724/443237.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "The Fallen of Forte". In your Opponent`s Main Phase: Choose Card from his Hand; Discard him, put a Counter on this card. When this card is sent to the Graveyard Bunish from your Opponent`s Graveyard Cards that equal to the number of the Counters that on this Card. [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/724/443237.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can be used to Ritual Summon "Fallen Angel - Forte". You ust also Tribute monsters from the Field or your Hand whose total Levels equal the Level of the Ritual Monster you are attepting to Ritual Summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FallenAngel0102 Posted September 30, 2011 Report Share Posted September 30, 2011 very original.... I like the art though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 1, 2011 Report Share Posted October 1, 2011 it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast Gardia might be slightly OPed for too easy summoning of any Fallen Angel monster overall it should be ok for the set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Darkness Posted October 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2011 Gardia might be slightly OPed for too easy summoning of any Fallen Angel monster So I should do it like this : During your Main Phase, you can discard a card; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Fallen monster from your deck. It returns to the hand in the End Phase. ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 yeah that would balance it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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