hitoshi Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 The original picture Changes since 1st Edition:New Effect costChange of Wording in EffectChanged from a Fiend to more accurate Spellcaster Hopefully, this is more balanced than the last one was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 some ocg errors.. and not abusable by bad reaction... an ok card... 7/10 post count: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kosmos Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Hmmm..good rewrite, Hitoshi. Though instead of "Offer 3000" i'm pretty sure it should be "Pay 3000", so that little part should(I think) be "you can pay 3000 Life Points to . . ."And i'd say a Necromancer would be a Dark monster instead of Light, don't you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 it should be "pay" 3000 Life Points. Otherwise, not bad. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hitoshi Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Thanks for the rates and suggestions guys. I will consider them when/if I make another version of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Nice for a newbie, I guess. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biollante spawn Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Shouldn't a necromancer be dark/?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 not bad 6/10 =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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