Arceuz Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/6716/170808g.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Overburn". Once per turn during either players turn, you can discard a card from your Hand to the Graveyard to select and activate 1 of the following effects: ● Select a card from you or your opponent's Graveyard and remove it from play. ● Destroy this card to negate a special summon. If this card is destroyed this way, special summon a "Medieval Landstar" from your Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/6072/170808.jpg[/img] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/465/170808y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/6072/170808.jpg[/img] [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/6072/170808.jpg[/img] please give some comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 Surprisingly good. I can't read the first one to comment on it. Rushing and Medieval are well balanced and have good effects. Star release is a bit OP'd as it can special summon the card you tributed... maybe one of it's materials instead? Overburn is fairly standard but it does it's job and thats what's important. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 2, 2011 Report Share Posted October 2, 2011 can you write the lore for the first one? Too small to read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arceuz Posted October 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 i have made some changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 Death Stallion is nicely done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 3, 2011 Report Share Posted October 3, 2011 the 2nd effect is Stallion might be OPed, gets a synchro onto the field way too easily you should have said Landstar only lasts 1 turn on the field via that effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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