dongaboy Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Poem 1deathShall it be seenand now willGo through HellAnd come backAnd Let The Undying heatScorch Your Soul Poem 2 Life Is a ScaleIt Must Have BalanceUnbalanced isDoom Beyond The Eye SightAnd Darkness ShallOvercome Your Body NoteThis is a deformed haiku464646 This is a poem i rote to a girlbefore i became bisexual Poem 3 My Love For You burns like the heat of a thousand sunsYou are like the heaven in my skyand u remain like fluttering Cherry BlossomsFlying You Love In my Air This is the last poem of the day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Wow, thats deep o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Umm....i don't see what this has to do with hellpoemer, but I think it really is something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Wow 0.oThat is deep, excactly what Slash said.Did you make that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 What slash and crazykev said that is deep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 wow... depressing but simple.... nice choice of not dragging it on.. 9/10 as far as poems like this would go.. post count: 10.. ~upgrade time~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dongaboy Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Wow 0.oThat is deep' date=' excactly what Slash said.Did you make that?[/quote'] Yes I Didand why thank u all for the compliments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Wow 0.oThat is deep' date=' excactly what Slash said.Did you make that?[/quote'] Yes I Didand why thank u all for the compliments Also, what's hellpoemer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dongaboy Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Wow 0.oThat is deep' date=' excactly what Slash said.Did you make that?[/quote'] Yes I Didand why thank u all for the compliments Also, what's hellpoemer? Its a yugioh cardUve never heard of itWOW 0.0but my next poem will release in 5 minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Wow 0.oThat is deep' date=' excactly what Slash said.Did you make that?[/quote'] Yes I Didand why thank u all for the compliments Also, what's hellpoemer? Its a yugioh cardUve never heard of itWOW 0.0but my next poem will release in 5 minutes Yeah, I never heard of it. Can't wait to see your new poem. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dongaboy Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 new poem addedUpdate^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 the second poem doesnt speak up as much as the first but still great no less ^_^ post count: 5.. ~snowagumon time~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dongaboy Posted February 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 New Love Poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 umm... O.O, the last poem starts of corny but its still great.... i would post my own poem now but its like 40+ lines.... lol 9/10... the first one gets most of the credit champion digimon post count: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 17, 2008 Report Share Posted February 17, 2008 Very cool poems, the first is, well, deep, and the last is very cool ^_^Can't wait for more ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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