TimSimm2 Posted October 6, 2011 Report Share Posted October 6, 2011 [img]http://i54.tinypic.com/2ewpt6r.jpg[/img] While you have 3 demented soldiers on the field you may special summon one "King of the Damned" in pac-up attack position [img]http://i56.tinypic.com/6hteh0.jpg[/img] Monster must be special summoned by tributing 3 "Demented Soldiers" Add up the total attack and defense of all tribute|Demented Soldiers" and add the attack and defense to this card for one turn. If this monster is sent to the graveyard, it is removed from play Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 too small, can you please write out the lore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimSimm2 Posted October 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 yea i edited my post sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 7, 2011 Report Share Posted October 7, 2011 King of the Damned is OPed it has 3500 atk already, that's enough for lv10 you add in further atk with its effect, it'll go well over 6000 Yes it's only 1 turn, but that's enough for OTK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimSimm2 Posted October 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 Yea makes sense lol. Ill have to try more next time n pay attention. Anyway thx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Case_closed Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 grammar: fix it up. Get rid of "leader of..." . Not needed in effect cards. i guess its fine, considering its so hard to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TGOR Posted October 8, 2011 Report Share Posted October 8, 2011 Did you draw the images up yourself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimSimm2 Posted October 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 No I found em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bobbyman46 Posted October 9, 2011 Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 You've got some OCG errors. You don't need the description of the actual guy. "The leader..." and stuff like that. When you say 3 Demented Soldiers make sure you say 3 "Demented Soldiers. "special summon" should be capitalized. [b]Put "When you control 3 "Demented Soldiers" you can Special Summon 1 "King of the Damned" from your hand in face-up Attack Position" For "King of the Damned" you don't need to put the Summoning Condition. "Monster must be special summoned by tributing 3 "Demented Soldiers" you don't need that. "Demented Soldier" already has the summoning effect for King.[/b]You should fix King of the damned so it says. "Once per turn, you can tribute 1 "Demented Soldier" you control to have this card gain 1500ATK and DEF until the End Phase. You should also lower king of the damned's ATK since it really isnt that hard to summon. Give it... 2500ATK 2000DEF. [u][b]Super Constructive Criticism.[/b][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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