hello

[orzhov]

hi everyone I'm new to this forum and this is my 1st post, sorry if I come off as a newb and if my pics are not that great well this is my 1st completed card pls rate
[img]http://i56.tinypic.com/xo03zt.jpg[/img]

effect:
"Sun Dragon Inti" + "Moon Dragon Quilla"
This card can not be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summoning. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Sun Dragon Inti" or "Moon Dragon Quilla" from your grave. Activate following effect(s) depending on which monster(s) are on the field:
● "Sun Dragon Inti": During your opponent's Standby Phase inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of the monster with the highest ATK on the field. (If it's a tie, you get to choose.)
● "Moon Dragon Quilla": This card is treated as a Dark attribute Monster instead. During your End Phase, gain Life Points equal to half the ATK of the monster with the highest ATK n the field. (If it's a tie, your opponent get to choose.)

[orzhov]

here's another version of that card

[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2s9t3qp.jpg[/IMG]

effect:
"Moon Dragon Quilla" + "Sun Dragon Inti"
This card can not be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summoning. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Moon Dragon Quilla" or "Sun Dragon Inti" from your grave. Activate following effect(s) depending on which monster(s) are on the field:
● "Moon Dragon Quilla": During your End Phase, gain Life Points equal to half the ATK of the monster with the highest ATK n the field. (If it's a tie, you get to choose.)
● "Sun Dragon Inti": This card is treated as a "Light" attribute instead. During your opponent's Standby Phase inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of the monster with the highest ATK on the field. (If it's a tie, your opponent gets to choose.)

[Sorin Markov]

I rated, and fixed your lores.
[spoiler=Manco's Lore Fixed]
"Sun Dragon Inti" + "Moon Dragon Quilla"
This card can not be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon[s]ing[/s]. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Sun Dragon Inti" or "Moon Dragon Quilla" from your [b]G[/b]rave[b]yard[/b]. Activate [b]the [/b]following effect(s) depending on which monster(s) are on the field:
● "Sun Dragon Inti": During your opponent's Standby Phase inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of the monster with the highest ATK on the field. [s](If it's a tie, you get to choose.)[/s]
● "Moon Dragon Quilla": This card is treated as a D[b]ARK[/b] [s]attribute[/s] [b]m[/b]onster instead. During your End Phase, gain Life Points equal to half the ATK of the monster with the highest ATK [b]o[/b]n the field. [s](If it's a tie, your opponent get to choose.) [/s]
Bold words are added or edited words.
Strikethorugh words are the things that need to be taken out.
The tie part doesn't really matter because the attack points are the same.
7/10[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Manco capac V2's lore]
"Moon Dragon Quilla" + "Sun Dragon Inti"
This card can not be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon[s]ing[/s]. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 "Moon Dragon Quilla" or "Sun Dragon Inti" from your [b]G[/b]rave[b]yard[/b]. Activate following effect(s) depending on which monster(s) are on the field:
● "Moon Dragon Quilla": During your End Phase, gain Life Points equal to half the ATK of the monster with the highest ATK [b]o[/b]n the field. [s](If it's a tie, you get to choose.)[/s]
● "Sun Dragon Inti": This card is treated as a LIGHT [s]attribute[/s] [b]monster[/b] instead. During your opponent's Standby Phase inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the ATK of the monster with the highest ATK on the field. [s](If it's a tie, your opponent gets to choose.) [/s]

Bold words are added or edited words.
Strikethorugh words are the things that need to be taken out.
The tie part doesn't really matter because the attack points are the same.
7/10[/spoiler]