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PLZ GRADE MY ARMAGEDON BEAST...

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Killey Newbie

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Yeah, I don't think this card is overpowered at all. Actually, it would be pretty difficult to get this card out on the field considering you need to Tribute 1 Fire, Wind, Water, and Earth monster. It's about as easy as trying to get Elemental Burst to work. Personally, I would ditch the bit about how it can't attack on the turn it is summoned and increase it's ATK to 4000 or 4500. Considering how stupid easy it is to get out 4000 ATK point monsters like "Arcana Force Extra - The Light Ruler", I think these additions would make it more usable.

 

As for actual critiques about the card, I think the theme of this card is confusing. You have to Tribute 4 monsters of different elements to bring out a Fire Type monster. I don't know about you but that seems a little off to me. Basically, this monster reminds me of Elemental Hero - Elixir because it fuses Elemental Heroes of the Earth, Water, Wind, and Fire.

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Yeah' date=' I don't think this card is overpowered at all. Actually, it would be pretty difficult to get this card out on the field considering you need to Tribute 1 Fire, Wind, Water, and Earth monster. It's about as easy as trying to get Elemental Burst to work. Personally, I would ditch the bit about how it can't attack on the turn it is summoned and increase it's ATK to 4000 or 4500. Considering how stupid easy it is to get out 4000 ATK point monsters like "Arcana Force Extra - The Light Ruler", I think these additions would make it more usable.

 

As for actual critiques about the card, I think the theme of this card is confusing. You have to Tribute 4 monsters of different elements to bring out a Fire Type monster. I don't know about you but that seems a little off to me. Basically, this monster reminds me of Elemental Hero - Elixir because it fuses Elemental Heroes of the Earth, Water, Wind, and Fire.

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i made it that way cause armagedon means hell on earth basicly armagedon is all the elements destroying the world i maybe athist but i know lots about the bible from my dad..

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I like the general idea of the card, but here's some things to help.

 

1: If you're sacrificing one of each element, don't make it one of those, it doesn't make much sense. It should either be Light, or Dark, and seeing how this is supposed to be an Armageddon Beast, Dark seems to be the obvious choice.

 

2: Post with IMG code.

 

3: Work on your grammar (particularly commas and periods.), and your OCG (Official Card Grammar.) Some things are stated in specific ways on the cards, this way it makes sure somebody can't bend the rules. Make sure you do the same.

 

4: Bigger isn't always better. New members tend to have thier first card be this ultimate, unstoppable killing machine that would simply be unfair in any game. Usually with an increasingly high ATK/DEF and insane Star Lvl. You have come close to this, but in the future focus less on the raw power and more on the effects.

 

Hope this helps you with anything.

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I like the general idea of the card' date=' but here's some things to help.

 

1: If you're sacrificing one of each element, don't make it one of those, it doesn't make much sense. It should either be Light, or Dark, and seeing how this is supposed to be an Armageddon Beast, Dark seems to be the obvious choice.

 

2: Post with IMG code.

 

3: Work on your grammar (particularly commas and periods.), and your OCG (Official Card Grammar.) Some things are stated in specific ways on the cards, this way it makes sure somebody can't bend the rules. Make sure you do the same.

well the card is hard to get out so the atk is fair an dit cant atk on first turn and the effect will only work if this 1 card is targeted cards look dark hole or riegeki or lightnong vortex will mow this card down since to test if the card is fair{be warned only be and my friend do this} we put it a special deck and test the card to see if its fair we do not sell the card and after tested we rip the paper card up and throw it in the trash}

4: Bigger isn't always better. New members tend to have thier first card be this ultimate, unstoppable killing machine that would simply be unfair in any game. Usually with an increasingly high ATK/DEF and insane Star Lvl. You have come close to this, but in the future focus less on the raw power and more on the effects.

 

Hope this helps you with anything.

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lots of OCG errors, 6.5/10 nice try ^-^

also mayb make the summoning conditions a bit more easier, like mayb by removing 1 FIRE, EARTH, WATER, and WIND attribute monsters from play from the Graveyard..

 

also u post the image by uploading ur picture on http://www.tinypic.com or on http://www.photobucket.com (but u need to register for photobucket)

n copy n paste the IMG Code ^-^

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to any google draw artist who view this post. be sure to put somewhere on the picture or near it you are the creator of the artwork. out of 20 pictures of dragons and other such things on googe 19 had no creators listed.{it sadens me to see that even if you make the work you are not geting any credit from it an all the work goes to waste.

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