TwinSeed Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 [img]http://i55.tinypic.com/72ygl5.png[/img] I own nothing. I found the render on Google Images. The fractals are from [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/250881-ycm-official-house-of-resources/"] Catman's C-25 Resource Pack [/url]. Instead of just telling me what it lacks, could you also provide tips to me on how to improve it? If you're just going to post a tut, then PM it to me and help me along if I really mess up somewhere. V2: [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/24dla0x.png[/IMG] I realize that I'm lacking flow, but I'm hoping that this is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 It's mainly colour scheme here first. The concept's a bit wrong. A grey background disracts from everything and just dulls the whole thing. The fractals are too dark, place them on Screen or similar. And concentrate on the actual Toxicroak for focus, as that's your focal and you should be trying to bring that out (darken everything else, blur the background, sharpen Toxicroak etc.) I have a tutorial in my sig, if you want to check it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted October 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 Yeah, I looked at that tut before starting anything. I attempted to apply what I got out of it, aside from color scheme, because I decided that the colors were nice.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 The focal is weird. Try to get some better flow coming from it; things are scattered everywhere. Keep learning, you'll get better fast (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwinSeed Posted October 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 Yeah, I had flow to start with, but then I kept picking at the image to "make it better" and could never get it back XD Thanks though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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