synchking667 Posted October 16, 2011 Report Share Posted October 16, 2011 This is the finished set please comment and rate ?/10. [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/8314/501784u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3817/501784p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/8645/501784a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/4705/501784.jpg[/img]the ones that were copied these are the card that were supposed to be in those slots where the second COSMIC KING was this should have been there: [img]http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/4705/501784.jpg[/img] where the second COSMIC-STAR ORB was this should have been there: [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1605/501784b.jpg[/img] and where the second and third COSMIC-STAR KNIGHTs were these should have been there: [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/4705/501784.jpg[/img] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4705/501784.jpg[/img]srry that other martial arts bird should have been this: [img]http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/4705/501784.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gReFuSiTo Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 You need to take some good pictures and they have to seem like real yugioh cards, otherwise it will be disastrous. Moreover you need to balance the cards much more. Sorry but I cannot pass this set... 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haverghast Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 I appreciate your effort...but, before you post, I recommend reading others cards and comments, but your new, with time comes experience, you'll get better now, to tell you what I'd reccomend. Tuners generally have effects, and further more, 2000 DEF on a level 1 is broken, stats should match the level but balance the effect. pictures aren't the most important....but....I think The Middle Planet card is a childs diagram...and the bird card, they made me laugh tbh. I generally use deviant art, and make sure u give them credit for their art... and finally, if you think its overpowered, or even close to being....chances are someone will tell you it is, you can rarley ever get 10/10 rating... hope I helped, sorry for the lengthy response oh i give you 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KENyakky Posted October 20, 2011 Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 Umm... I don't think that this Set is finished yet. Some of these pictures look like they didn't have much effort put into them, some were ripped off of other cards, and I am pretty sure Game Freak would not appreciate using a Latios picture as a yugioh card (as well as the ones with their watermarks still on them). Aside from the pictures, this set is very unbalanced, if you used this in an actual duel, the whole thing would probably be banned. Cosmic King is one of the cheapest cards I have ever seen, what happens when you use foolish burial on it, followed by a monster reborn while meeting the conditions of the card? Cosmic-Star Orb needs to be a normal monster, just put "/ Tuner" in the "Type" area. Cosmic-Star Warrior Battle Beast needs to have it's ATK lowerd or lose the Summon from the graveyard part, and instead of "inflict the difference as battle damage" just put "peircing damage", and the Summon part needs to be "Special" Summon. Blade master needs to be a higher level monster, and it has to negate all [i]other[/i] monsters effects, with a "until the end of your turn" type of effect. Lythi? (I can't see the name) needs to be at a higher level. Middle Planet is a little overpowered, but not that much, just add a down side. Cosmic Reverse would be better as a trap card, and it needs to target a [i]Face-Up[/i] monster. Star Barrier is too cheap, also counter trap cards usualy require a cost. The End is WAY too powerfull. The Begining is too cheap, I would suggest to make it so that the banished monsters go to the Graveyard instead and it gains a set amount of ATK instead of the combined ATK. Prince needs lower DEF and to be a normal monster. Gong needs to be a lower level, how about 8-6? and it's Special Summoning effect is too cheap. Dragon needs to have it's ATK lowered or needs to have 2 or more non-tuner synchro materials. LionHault and Warrior are fine, you should leave them as they are. Your set has potentual, but not there yet, so I have to give it a 2.5/10. Whew! That was long winded. Hope that helped you. KENyakky, out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
synchking667 Posted October 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2011 thanks to all for your advise. i am new to making cards. and i am actually a kid. i will work on it and probably stick more to the game itself. again i say thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merciless Overlord Knic Posted November 10, 2011 Report Share Posted November 10, 2011 i just looked over thee and please dont copy the pics for latios, battle ox, and the wicked avatar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patwag Posted November 12, 2011 Report Share Posted November 12, 2011 THE CAPITAL LETTERS MAKE ME CONFUSED the pictures are horrible. you got the pokemon Latios and A DUCK and one of them is from a mmo! apart from that i got bored and stopped reading after cosmic king and it seems you need alot of sertain cards on the field to have pretty weak effects, you need better effects and more special summoning and adding to hand cards o overlord knic thankou for making me spot out that you used real yugioh cards to make new ones im sorry im harsh 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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