Some Spacey Cards! Please rate ;)

[SteamboatStitch]

DISCLAIMER: I did not create, nor do I own any of the art presented in these cards. All art belongs to =Eolhin, and her art and photography on Deviant Art can be found here: http://eolhin.deviantart.com/

 

If you find any OCG or grammar errors, please notify me in your reply or via PM so I may make corrections.

 

This card can only be activated if there are 2 or 4 monsters on your side of the field. If the number of monsters on your side of the field changes, this card is destroyed. During each of your Standby Phases, you may roll 1 six-sided die to activate 1 of the following effects:

 

1 - Destroy a Spell or Trap Card on your side of the field.

2 - Destroy a Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field.

3 - Your opponent gains 500 Life Points.

4 - You gain 500 Life Points.

5 - Decrease the ATK of 1 of your monsters by 1000 until the End Phase of your turn.

6 - Increase the ATK of 1 of your monsters by 1000 until the End Phase of your turn.

[Slash]

Great, thats all I can say 9.3/10 ^_^

[SteamboatStitch]

thanks :)

[Shadow Dude64]

9/10

[SteamboatStitch]

Thank you for your rating :D

[Chevalier]

All fractal images! =P

Great Job! Spiral Galaxy is tilting on broken. But nevertheless, Good Job!

For a your *third* set, it's great!

[SteamboatStitch]

thanks Org, always like to read your reviews. ^_^

[Kosmos]

Nice cards there. :)

I like 'em.

Only OCG errors I could see is some capitalization for "Deck". Also, in Dark Gate of Space, I see "If you cannot discard the same amount, you receive 500 Life Points of damage for each undiscarded card."

which i'm sure should say something like:

"If you cannot discard the same amount, you take 500 points of damage to your Life Points for every card you did not discard."

8.5/10 - Good cards, just some OCG mistakes.

[shonenhikada]

nice cards,but dude this looks like something you would be visualizing if you were on pot. 9/10

[SteamboatStitch]

Thanks Kosmos. I did feel somewhat akward about that saying, I felt like I was tripping over my tounge no matter what I wrote. ;P

 

And how exactly would you know this stuff is what you would see if you were high? ;P

 

*EDIT* fixed OCG and grammar errors on "Dark Gate of Space" and "Golden Spiral Galaxy", as well as adjusting "Golden Spiral Galaxy"'s effect.

[Eolhin]

I assure you shonenhikada, no drugs were abused in the making of these fractals. ;) Though a great many electrons were horribly inconvenienced.

 

Just for everyone's enlightenment, the program I used to make these (Apophysis) is free and can be found at this link, for anyone that wants to play with it themselves: http://www.apophysis.org/ No drawing skills needed.

 

Have fun. :)

Eolhin

[SteamboatStitch]

thanks for that Eolhin, I'm sure people will love that :)

 

*EDIT* made even more grammar corrections.

[kid]

9/10

[SteamboatStitch]

Thank you for your rating.

[72night]

9.5/10 ^-^ i like ur cards

here r the OCG errors that i think r made:

 

for 'Dark Gate of Space', wen u say 'During each of your Draw Phases you may draw 1 extra card', i think u can say 'During each of your Draw Phases, you may draw 2 cards from your Deck, instead of 1.' Also wen u say, 'At the end of the 5 turns you must discard cards from your hand to your Graveyard equal to the number of extra cards you drew' you can say 'On the fifth turn this card was activated, discard the number of cards equal to the number of cards you drew from this card's effect.' ^-^ o n dunt forget the comma between Draw Phases and you (^_-)

 

for 'Filaments of Energy': well, i dunt rly no much abt dice cards but... wen u say 'During each of your Standby Phases, you may roll 1 die to activate 1 of the following effects:' i think ur suppose 2 say, 'During each of your Standby Phases, you may roll a six-sided die to activate 1 of the following effects:'

 

for 'Golden Spiral Galaxy': ummm, wen u say 'During each of your Main Phases you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster from your or your opponent's Graveyard.' i think it should say 'During each of you Main Phases, you may pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster either from your or your opponent's Graveyard.' or... 'During each of your Main Phases, you may pay 1000 Life Points to select 1 monster from either your or your opponent's Graveyard. Special Summon the selected monster onto your side of the field and treat the Special Summoned monster as a Normal Summon.'= thats wat it says on 'Monster Reborn' =P. also wen u say 'If this card is destroyed, you may pay 500 Life Points to bring 1 "Solar Explosion" from your Deck to your hand.' you should say, 'When this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, move 1 "Solar Explosion" from your Deck to your hand. Your Deck is then shuffled.' ^-^ thats from 'Witch of the Black Forest'

 

for 'Solar Explosion': wen u say 'When this card is played, all Field, Equip, and Continuous Spell Cards are destroyed.' im shure its suppose 2 say, 'When this card is played, destroy all Field, Equip, and Continuous Spell Cards on the field.' altho isnt it the same as all Spells?... 'When this card is played, destroy all Spell Cards on the field.'

 

n finally, 'Wormhole Flower': wen u say, '...you may remove 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field from play.' it should probably say, '...you may remove from play 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field.' ^-^

 

hope a 1 star was helpful ^-^

[SteamboatStitch]

Wow . thanks for that, it really helps. I'll be sure to fix them up tomorrow (I am the sleepy right now)

[SteamboatStitch]

*EDIT* deleted for accidental double post

[72night]

no problem ^-^ happy 2 b of a help :3

[SteamboatStitch]

*EDIT* Massive redoing of the OCG on all cards. (many thanks to 72night for the help.)