silvericeman Posted October 20, 2011 Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 [IMG]http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q311/silvericeman/newwer2.jpg[/IMG][img]http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q311/silvericeman/2xcard.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PAINTAIN GOD OF DUNDA MT. Posted October 20, 2011 Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 All I have to say is interesting effect... Powerful ATK gain, and able to add 1 Monster from your Graveyard to your hand... But I think you should lower the Level of the monster brought to your hand to a Level 2.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silvericeman Posted October 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 [quote name='✪✪✪~Star~✪✪✪' timestamp='1319071538' post='5588893'] All I have to say is interesting effect... Powerful ATK gain, and able to add 1 Monster from your Graveyard to your hand... But I think you should lower the Level of the monster brought to your hand to a Level 2.. [/quote] i dropped the level by one i just think lvl 2 is too little i also posted a new card i made the picture in paint so i know its bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorin Markov Posted October 20, 2011 Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 Warrior type should be Warrior-Type. i would take away "In addition while this spell is active" and cap the in every. it makes the effect shorter and a little bit easier to read. but its not bad, the other one is good too. i give the first one a 7/10 and the second one 6.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silvericeman Posted October 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 [quote name='Sorin Markov' timestamp='1319137142' post='5589812'] Warrior type should be Warrior-Type. i would take away "In addition while this spell is active" and cap the in every. it makes the effect shorter and a little bit easier to read. but its not bad, the other one is good too. i give the first one a 7/10 and the second one 6.8/10 [/quote] thanks for the input ill update ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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