Cowsmacker Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 yo this is my 2nd card my last card armageddon beast got a decent rating and ime hoping this one will to. [attachment=23413] i got this from a dragon artist on google it didnt say the name of the creator of the drawing but i will be searching and i will update once it is found. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Once you improve on the quality of the finished product of your effect, the overall idea of the card's purpose, and the quality of the card's image, your work will be about perfect. Other than these things, you did a great job. If you need any help with anything, or if you have any questions / comments / concerns, feel free to either private message myself, or an administrator / moderator. Again, great job. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowsmacker Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 hay i went threw and fixed some grammer errors there might be some mispelling but ile find them sometime or other. and i updated it so it is capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tron50 Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 really awsomr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kosmos Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 It's a nice idea.There's just quite a lot of grammar mistakes, but that can all be fixed.What I think though is that it needs a balance on the part where players draw cards. Like if they draw 5 Spell or Trap Cards, it doesn't say anything more, so are they sent to the player's hand or Graveyard?Good job on your second card. 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 It's a nice idea.There's just quite a lot of grammar mistakes' date=' but that can all be fixed.What I think though is that it needs a balance on the part where players draw cards. Like if they draw 5 Spell or Trap Cards, it doesn't say anything more, so are they sent to the player's hand or Graveyard?Good job on your second card. 6.7/10[/quote']That is what is bothering me too. Also if the monster they draw can't be Special Summoned because of there effect? Of because there is a card on the field that prevents you or your opponent from summoning a monster. I would change the effect to this: Each player draws cards cards until they drew a monster card. Both players check the drawn cards and then they are all send to the graveyard. The life points of the player who's monster had the lowest ATK is cut in half.(There are Grammar/OCG errors in there)That also makes it less overpowerd because if you get to summon the monster you could have a realy strong monster. So if your opponent drew a bad monster like Kuriboh and you drew Super Conductor Tyranno than your opponent also loses 3000 life points from the battle. Or more because of cards that power up your monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowsmacker Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 hay ty for mentioning some missing parts ive added them and ime still searching for the creator of the drawing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Make your disclaimer clearer, please.NO OCG.Overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowsmacker Posted February 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 Make your disclaimer clearer' date=' please.NO OCG.Overpowered.[/quote'] dude this card isnt overpowered thier is just a big chance you will draw the weakest monster instead of oponet. and i update dit so neither player takes battle damage the turn the card is activated and quoted that the cards that where drawn before the monster card go to the bottom of the deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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