Cherz Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 well, i made some support for penguins, and if people like this card, then ill make more [img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7853/491591.jpg[/img] lore: when this card is flip summoned, destroy one spell or trap card your opponent controlls. Then select one "penguin" monster you controll, exept "penguin archer," and flip it face down. [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/7853/491591.jpg[/img] Flip: select one monster you controll and one monster your opponent controlls. the monster you selected gains 300 attack. the monster your opponent controlls returns to their hand. NEW!!!! [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/7853/491591.jpg[/img] NEW!!! [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7853/491591.jpg[/img] NEW!!! [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7853/491591.jpg[/img] NEW!!!!!! [img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/9452/491591aa.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mlaxeson Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 I like the theme a lot!!! You should really post the OCG underneth the card so that people can copy and past it into replies to correct OCG. Most wont bother if they have to type it out. But, cos I like the idea of Penguin cards, I'm going to: corrected OCG: When this card is Flip Summoned, destroy one (face-up?) spell or trap card on your opponents side of the Field. Then you can select one "Penguin" monster you control, except "Penguin Archer" and flip it into face-down defence position. For (what I presume if you're going to create cards with similar effects) is a powerful flip effect I think the ATK and DEF are too high. Lower one, or both. The image needs a background, white just always looks like you haven't bothered, just Photoshop it onto an image of Antarctica or something. Otherwise, really good card: 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 so, if any 1 is reading this will this help penguins?thanx, i am looking for some backgrounds. it was verry hard to find a penguin with a bow however, but yea, im going to lower this cards attack.ohh, and i meant either face up, or face down spell or trapi fear my ocg in penguin trooper is off. could some one help me with that, and plz dont let that be the only thing i get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mlaxeson Posted October 23, 2011 Report Share Posted October 23, 2011 if you meant either face-up or down then the original OCG is ok, but I think should read: destroy one card in an opponents spell/trap card zone. but that's just personal preference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 oh, will that make it better?so, any thing els? im going to start a new thread if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developous Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Penguin Trooper seems a bit too much since you can send ANY of your opponent's monster to the hand maybe make that more specific? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1319449059' post='5597510'] Penguin Trooper seems a bit too much since you can send ANY of your opponent's monster to the hand maybe make that more specific? [/quote] thats kinda the point. like penguin solduir, u can bounce.why, not very many bounce, so y not make penguins do the sameso, should i make more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 you have any more in mind, we'd like to see them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mlaxeson Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Controll is spelt control with one L Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 ohh, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1319470859' post='5597849'] you have any more in mind, we'd like to see them [/quote] ok, heres one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1319470859' post='5597849'] you have any more in mind, we'd like to see them [/quote] okif you had a penguin deck, would these be worth running? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 25, 2011 Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 Demolitionist's effect is really good since it can work for any of your opponent's monsters especially since he loses them both in a sense anyway 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1319529061' post='5599544'] Demolitionist's effect is really good since it can work for any of your opponent's monsters especially since he loses them both in a sense anyway 9/10 [/quote] thank you!!! should i lower demolitionists level, or keep it. i think its level is the draw back for the great effect, but whats ur oppinion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Galvantula} Posted October 25, 2011 Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 [quote name='lukerock99' timestamp='1319582735' post='5600623'] should i lower demolitionists level, or keep it. i think its level is the draw back for the great effect, but whats ur oppinion? [/quote] Well, I think that you could keep that level, but there should be one that can be Special Summoned, or can Special Summon another level 4 or lower penguin from the deck after being flipped. Good job on the pictures too, they obviously suit the name of the card. 8/10 - Rating increases if you make more and use the latest card grammar. it's okay if you're not sure about it, then you can just stick to the older card grammar. if you're new to card making, then the old grammar is good to start with, as the new grammar can be a bit of gibberish at times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 [quote name='Infini-Tea' timestamp='1319583321' post='5600637'] Well, I think that you could keep that level, but there should be one that can be Special Summoned, or can Special Summon another level 4 or lower penguin from the deck after being flipped. Good job on the pictures too, they obviously suit the name of the card. 8/10 - Rating increases if you make more and use the latest card grammar. it's okay if you're not sure about it, then you can just stick to the older card grammar. if you're new to card making, then the old grammar is good to start with, as the new grammar can be a bit of gibberish at times. [/quote] yea, im new at card maker, so im using old grammer. yea, im working on some more ideas. thanx for the imput. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted October 25, 2011 Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 Flip: Select 2 monsters your opponent controls. Your opponent picks one; destroy that card and return the other to the owners hand. sry, but penguin knight does practically the same thing, with no tribute cost, no choice for your opponent and you can select any monster card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 [quote name=':bcoe' timestamp='1319583801' post='5600654'] Flip: Select 2 monsters your opponent controls. Your opponent picks one; destroy that card and return the other to the owners hand. sry, but penguin knight does practically the same thing, with no tribute cost, no choice for your opponent and you can select any monster card on the field. [/quote] actually, that is penguin soldure, and, well, one gets destroyed. also, penguin knight has a weird effect. but i see ur point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 26, 2011 Report Share Posted October 26, 2011 [quote name='lukerock99' timestamp='1319582735' post='5600623'] thank you!!! should i lower demolitionists level, or keep it. i think its level is the draw back for the great effect, but whats ur oppinion? [/quote] if you want to specify a level to make it less versatile that's up to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1319628497' post='5601422'] if you want to specify a level to make it less versatile that's up to you [/quote] hmmm. maby. ill sleep on it. i made some more penguins. infini-tea, i made one from your request. and penguin ninja also! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted October 26, 2011 Report Share Posted October 26, 2011 wow, penguin ninja's effect is really good. the effect goes with the name as well, good job. You could maybe reduce it to Level 4 (and its DEF a bit if you do) and say if this card attacks your opponent directly, half battle damage taken. it would make it more playable i think, and not broken for 2100 ATK! either way, its still a good card. here's a Penguin i made a while back you might like [URL=http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/832/penguinphilosopher22.jpg/][IMG]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/8972/penguinphilosopher22.jpg[/IMG][/URL] When this card is Flip Summoned, select 1 random card in your opponents hand. Choose either Monster, Spell or Trap and remove that card face-down in the removed from play zone. During your opponents second Standby Phase after this card effects activation, reveal the card. if you guessed the correct type, your opponent must return all cards of the same type they control on the field to their hand. Return the removed card to your opponents hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2011 yea, [quote name=':bcoe' timestamp='1319668783' post='5602063'] wow, penguin ninja's effect is really good. the effect goes with the name as well, good job. You could maybe reduce it to Level 4 (and its DEF a bit if you do) and say if this card attacks your opponent directly, half battle damage taken. it would make it more playable i think, and not broken for 2100 ATK! either way, its still a good card. here's a Penguin i made a while back you might like [url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/832/penguinphilosopher22.jpg/"][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/8972/penguinphilosopher22.jpg[/img][/url] When this card is Flip Summoned, select 1 random card in your opponents hand. Choose either Monster, Spell or Trap and remove that card face-down in the removed from play zone. During your opponents second Standby Phase after this card effects activation, reveal the card. if you guessed the correct type, your opponent must return all cards of the same type they control on the field to their hand. Return the removed card to your opponents hand. [/quote] i remember seeing this card. good job. this inspired me to make penguin monsters, so over all thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 27, 2011 Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 [quote name=':bcoe' timestamp='1319668783' post='5602063'] wow, penguin ninja's effect is really good. the effect goes with the name as well, good job. You could maybe reduce it to Level 4 (and its DEF a bit if you do) and say if this card attacks your opponent directly, half battle damage taken. it would make it more playable i think, and not broken for 2100 ATK! either way, its still a good card. here's a Penguin i made a while back you might like [url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/832/penguinphilosopher22.jpg/"][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/8972/penguinphilosopher22.jpg[/img][/url] When this card is Flip Summoned, select 1 random card in your opponents hand. Choose either Monster, Spell or Trap and remove that card face-down in the removed from play zone. During your opponents second Standby Phase after this card effects activation, reveal the card. if you guessed the correct type, your opponent must return all cards of the same type they control on the field to their hand. Return the removed card to your opponents hand. [/quote] You should have also added an effect as to what happens if you guessed wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted October 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 so, do u like these Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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