TOM 3.5 Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 [url="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/830/creepert.jpg/"]http://imageshack.us...0/creepert.jpg/[/url] [url="http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/9632/skeletonx.jpg%5B/spoiler%5DI"]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/9632/skeletonx.jpg[/url] will post redux of my old thread and make them a lot better In advance I hate fanart because most of it I think is stupid and dum so if say it sucks or say I hate it that really does not mean anything and i am not raging about it even though I repect it if you think I am but just let you know I am not. Do not spam or flame or I will report you. Here is the first card V2 Skeleton Lore:Once per turn you can discard up to 3 cards from your hand to the graveyard. Your opponent takes damage x600 for each card discarded. Creeper Lore:When this card is destroyed both players take 1200 points of damage.Remove the monster that destroyed this card and your opponent loses half of its ATK points. Zombie Lore: One of the fastest mobs and first mob to exist.It drops its rotting flesh upon its death. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Lore correction, I think... [Creeper]: [quote]When this card is destroyed: Both players take 800 damage.[/quote] Anyways, the card art is pretty... bad, to be honest. If you made it, then props for trying, but I prefer the white background. The card itself? For a level 4 burn monster, it's meh. Very meh, though the average ATK is nice. Not like that matters, though. I'd much rather run Koala over this. All in all, 6/10. Brush up on your OCG. Maybe the card would be better if: [quote]When this card is destroyed: Both players take 800 damage. When this card is destroyed by battle: Banish the monster that destroyed this card by battle and inflict damage to your opponent equal to its Level x 100.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 I'm gonna stop you right here for a bit. The effects are just meh. 800 burn isn't that amazing, and I always thought of the creeper as more of a destructive explosion that kills stuff than just some minor burn. My idea would be more of killing another card as well as the burn. Makes it a decent attacker and killer. On the Skeleton, I'm sorry if I'm being mean but the effect is blegh. I don't want to lose 3 cards for 600 burn. I'd suggest rethinking the Skeleton completely and going away from burn effects for your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Weird Skeleteon is gone or am I blind my post go deleted@sparkle thanks I think I will change the burn to 600 per card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Nice. And btw, you can edit your first post rather than just posting them new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Sparkle that creeper is a place holderI knowBy the way how did you get to have a tab for pictures and stuff like in lunars sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted October 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 [media]http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/10/fullsetofarmor.jpg/[/media] [media]http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/805/zombiej.jpg/[/media] Full Set of Armor Lore: You an avoid damage by adding counters (10 max.) x100. When his card has 10 counters on it send it to the graveyard. Zombie Lore: One of the fastest mobs and first mob to exist.It drops its rotting flesh upon its death. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TOM 3.5 Posted October 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2011 Working on a card anybody want to join my minecraft map sharing club Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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