Shadoeh Posted October 29, 2011 Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 These are my most prized cards. I didnt add lores, so sorry if you cant read them. Please Rate and Comment. [Spoiler=Monsters] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/1044/198426w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [img]http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/9689/198426y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Spells/Traps] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8131/198426c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8131/198426c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9682/198426.jpg[/img] [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 29, 2011 Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 for Hiatus, you can't discard from the deck Kyanu is OPed for drawing 2 constantly as long as you meet the graveyard requirement. You should limit it to a certain # of times in a duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadoeh Posted October 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 lol I seem to have that problem with the whole "discard from deck" thing. As of Kyanu, I didnt think it was too OPed. Drawing an extra card during the Draw Phase didnt seem like anything too drastic to me. I kinda had to make up an effect, since its a LV 7 and requires two tributes and all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted October 29, 2011 Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 I really like how your sea serpents “flood” the field. A long time ago, a team of card makers that I was a part of had to make a sea serpent set for a rather large contest. It’s good to see another set like it bouncing around YCM. [b]Hiatus[/b]. Sending a card from your deck to the graveyard isn’t so much a cost as a wonderful effect. I don’t think this card really needs it because its special summoning abilities are enough to make it interesting. I would also like to point out that Hiatus has a lot of flood potentially (you can discard 3 cards, summon 3 Recrioos and hit your opponent for potentially 7900 damage!) I would recommend limiting it to once per turn, and maybe only letting Hiatus target the deck. The final result would look something like this: [i]“You can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 “Legendary Serpent: Recrioos” from your deck. Activate the effect of only 1 “Legendary Serpent: Hiatus” per turn.”[/i] [b]Recrioos[/b], on the other hand, is well built. 2100 seems like just the right amount of ATK. [b]Isius [/b]opens up that flood potential to too high of a level, much like Hiatus does. I would lower the discard cost by 1, and restrict Hiatus’s summoning so it’s brought out in defence position. [b]Kyanu[/b]: This card gives insane card advantage, but you’re right to point out that you do have to tribute 2 monsters for it. I would switch its ATK and DEF around, and change its effect to: [i]“This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of a “Legendary Serpent” card. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can banish 1 “Legendary Serpent” monster from your Graveyard to draw 1 card.”[/i] You still get the same draw power, but not an unlimited amount. [b]Yakkin[/b]. I like that you included a “WIND monster” with the sea serpents. Not just because of the diversity, but because I’m a little biased towards that Attribute. [b]Poseidonas[/b]. This is the one that caught my attention. I like every part of its effect. I can picture the combo now: Recrioos dies, so you summon Isius who summons Hiatus who summons another Recrioos. The three of them make this monstrous serpent. I would actually raise its ATK to a solid 4000 and add one last sentence to its effect: “Once per turn, you may banish 1 “Legendary Serpent” from your Graveyard”. That way, you can either keep the monsters in your grave for your other serpents, or start buffing this card’s ATK and DEF back up! A great job on this set! It’s a little rough around the edges, but it has great potential. I give it a solid [b]7/10[/b]. I hope this helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadoeh Posted October 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 Thank you very much! I appreciate the good review. I will fix up the other cards, and try to make the set a bit better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 29, 2011 Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 [quote name='Shadoeh' timestamp='1319854730' post='5605463'] lol I seem to have that problem with the whole "discard from deck" thing. As of Kyanu, I didnt think it was too OPed. Drawing an extra card during the Draw Phase didnt seem like anything too drastic to me. I kinda had to make up an effect, since its a LV 7 and requires two tributes and all. [/quote] Unless you have a Cost Down on you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadoeh Posted October 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 True, That would make it easier to bring out strong monsters like that huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 29, 2011 Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 yeah though I don't know how popular that card is anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadoeh Posted October 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 Well I've never seen it around lately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 29, 2011 Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 figures, but it's still something to keep in mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadoeh Posted October 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2011 True Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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