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I just got the hang of card making. Plz look


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[font=lucida sans unicode, lucida grande, sans-serif][size=4]These are some cards I made i just got the hang of it even though I joined in [b]August last year[/b]. Please tell me what i should make better and my good points.[/size][/font]

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You've put two of the same card. I think the second one was meant to be "Hand of Dragon Ritual" am I right?

Well, the card is okay but letting you decrease a monsters attack down to 0 every turn, is a bit overpowered. Perhaps allowing to decrease the monsters attack to 0 at the price of 500 life points or something.

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Did you play duelmasters before your card text reminds me of the game. They wrote everything in present tense.
It's a good attempt and all. And i don't really mind the ability. Common guys the chaos decks were/is more brutal than this after all this does not mean the monster is gone or destroyed there are still ways of using it.
I suggest that the card is unable to attack the turn this effect is used that's more like it.
What i feel it lacks is difficulty of summoning :).
It's not an amazing game changer unless there's some difficulty playing it (well it's only me but, i feel it's not the ability alone that makes a card great but also the difficulty to bring it out :D).

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