Dandorian Posted November 2, 2011 Report Share Posted November 2, 2011 [center]Just wondering if this card is a little over the top. I wasn't sure so I didn't post it in real cards [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/6263/119495.jpg[/img][/center] [center]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Dandorian of the Lunar Sun". As long as this card remains face-up on the field neither player may activate spell or trap cards during thier Main Phase 1. This card is unaffected by all monster effects. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle inflict 100 points of damage for every "Black Blade" monster in your Graveyard.[/center] [center] I wish I had a better pic to depict this card, but this was the closest I had in mind that I could find. [img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/5143/119495l.jpg[/img][/center] [center]As long as this card is on the field the controller of this card can pay in multiples of 100 life points (maximim 500) and increase the ATK of all "Black Blade" monsters on the field equal to the number of Life Points paid. Durning your 2nd Standby Phase you may tribute this card in order to special summon one "Bektos the Black Blade" from your hand or deck.[/center] [center]here is a few examples of the Black Blade monsters. I don't know how to get a dot on the card for card effects.[/center] [center] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/6263/119495.jpg[/img][/center] [center]If this card is sent to the graveyard by an opponents card effect your opponent then selects and applies 1 one of the following effects: --Look at your opponent's hand. For every card in his/her hand you gain 1000 Life Points for every card that includes "Black Blade" in its name . --Destroy all monsters on the field and inflict half the total attack points to the owner of this card.[/center] [center] This effect may be over the top.[/center] [center][img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/6263/119495.jpg[/img][/center] [center]Once per turn you can pay 1000 life points then exchange your life points with your opponent's life points.[/center] [center][img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/6263/119495.jpg[/img][/center] [center]Once per turn increase the attack of one "Black Blade" monster (excluding this card) by 300 for every monster in the Graveyard that includes "Black Blade" in it's name until the End Phase.[/center] [center] [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/6263/119495.jpg[/img] Once per turn you can pay Life Points in mulitiples of 100 (max 1000) to have this monster's ATK increas by that much until the End Phase.[/center] [center][img]http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/6263/119495.jpg[/img][/center] [center]Once per turn during the damage step you can increase this monster's ATK points by 100 for every 100 life points you pay (Max 500) until the End Phase.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keeyan_Corbitt Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 The cards are great ideas, but look at some of the level 5 and 6 monsters. Their ATK and DEF are way too low for that star level. A few OCG errors, but good overall 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flamey2112 Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 8/10 The 8 star has a really cool effect but I think it is a bit over the top. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandorian Posted November 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 Thanks for the imput. What ocg errors do I have? I'd like to correct them. The 8 star: Torstar the Black Blade, costs you 2000 life points in order to make himself 3600. I thought that would be a balanced effect. True you can choose how much you pay but he looses it all at the end phase so he won't be staying around long if your apponent summons a 1700+ monster. He's a one time deal. Maybe I should make him 2600 and only give him a 500 boost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandorian Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Okay i tried to fix the OCG errors. Hope that helped. Also I modified some of the monsters. Hope it's better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merciless Overlord Knic Posted November 8, 2011 Report Share Posted November 8, 2011 very good. 9/10. They could be real. The dot for effects is alt 8. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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