Fortress walls (spell card)

[Ace9Brine]

Here is the card what do you rate it out of 10? Also tell me how I could do better.

[img]http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7629/276551.jpg[/img]

[ragnarok1945]

make sure that only lasts for 1 turn, don't make it PERMANENT

[Max Darkness]

[b]Name[/b] (4/10)
Not very imaginative, and I'm almost sure an existing card has that name.

[b]Picture[/b] (2/10)
Blurry, and clearly from a videogame. Try Deviantart, Imageshack or Pixiv for better images.

[b]Effect[/b] (2/10)
Almost useless in the modern game, since so many cards are destroyed through effects rather than battle. Plus, 'Swords of Revealing Light' and 'Pixie Ring' give the same amount of protection for no cost. Also, it being a Normal Spell means it couldn't be used during your opponent's turn, the only time they would have the opportunity to attack defending monsters.

[b]OCG [/b](3/10)
Here's the fix:
[i]Discard 1 card: This turn, your opponent cannot attack Defense Position monsters you control.[/i]

[b]Overall[/b] (11/40) = (2.75/10)
The effect is unusable and the image is poor. Not much more to say.