possibly my longest effect ever [Glowfly]

[Glogatha]

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[spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 monster you control. As long as this card remains face up on the field, cards that would be sent to the graveyard are banished instead. Once per turn you may tribute one card on your side of the field to activate 1 of the following:
-Destroy 1 monster on your field and inflict damage to your opponents Life points equal to the attack of the destroyed monster
-increase this cards ATK by 700
When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, declare 1 kind of card. (monster, magic, or trap) your opponent must discard one card of that type both players draw a card. When this card is destroyed, shuffle all Banished cards into each players deck.[/spoiler]

basically, i wanted a card that could mill traps and be a Return from a different dimension too, but..im pretty sure this is OP'd....plz rate....

[Apocalypse Cards]

I think that if you made it slightly harder to summon and lower the defense a bit, that you could balance it out a bit more. As most high attack, low level, effect monsters have almost no defense at all.

[Max Darkness]

[b]OCG Fix:[/b]
Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 monster you control. Cards that would be sent to the Graveyard are banished instead. When this card destroys a monster by battle: Choose 1 kind of card (Monster, Spell, or Trap Card); Your opponent discards 1 card of the chosen kind, and both players draw 1 card. When this card is destroyed: Shuffle all banished cards into their owner's Deck. Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 card you control; Select and activate 1 of the following effects:
* This card gains 700 ATK.
* Discard 2 Spell Cards: Add 1 Trap Card from your Deck to your hand.


It certainly has too many effects for a Level 5; it has the foundations of about four semi-staples. And considering that it banishes everything, you'll be losing two Spell Cards in exchange for a Trap Card, for the cost of giving up another card (which will also be banished). It's a -2 effect, so not good. Otherwise, it is prime fodder for setting up a 'D.D. Warrior' return through its own summoning, and an easy 5 Levels for a Synchro Summon/'Adreas'. I would remove the search effect, and retool it on a different monster, while refining the discard-and-draw effect.

[Glogatha]

[quote name='Max Darkness' timestamp='1320338570' post='5614750']
[b]OCG Fix:[/b]
Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 monster you control. Cards that would be sent to the Graveyard are banished instead. When this card destroys a monster by battle: Choose 1 kind of card (Monster, Spell, or Trap Card); Your opponent discards 1 card of the chosen kind, and both players draw 1 card. When this card is destroyed: Shuffle all banished cards into their owner's Deck. Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 card you control; Select and activate 1 of the following effects:
* This card gains 700 ATK.
* Discard 2 Spell Cards: Add 1 Trap Card from your Deck to your hand.


It certainly has too many effects for a Level 5; it has the foundations of about four semi-staples. And considering that it banishes everything, you'll be losing two Spell Cards in exchange for a Trap Card, for the cost of giving up another card (which will also be banished). It's a -2 effect, so not good. Otherwise, it is prime fodder for setting up a 'D.D. Warrior' return through its own summoning, and an easy 5 Levels for a Synchro Summon/'Adreas'. I would remove the search effect, and retool it on a different monster, while refining the discard-and-draw effect.
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thank you, i had the trap effect discard two, because i thought it would be OP'd, i will fix it up a bit and repost it later hehe thanks!

edited, but i couldn't think of a way to change the trap effect in a way i liked so i abandoned it...also...i feel like it needs more drawbacks, any suggestions?

[Apocalypse Cards]

I think you could maybe make it a level 8 monster. Also how much damage is done to the opponent's life points?

BTW I know I am off topic, but I would love it if you checked out my new up and coming set: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/267567-dlos-demon-lord-set/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/267567-dlos-demon-lord-set/[/url]

[peo111]

like he said ^ it should be a level 8

[Glogatha]

[quote name='Apocalypse Cards' timestamp='1320339702' post='5614763']
I think you could maybe make it a level 8 monster. Also how much damage is done to the opponent's life points?

BTW I know I am off topic, but I would love it if you checked out my new up and coming set: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/267567-dlos-demon-lord-set/"]http://forum.yugiohc...demon-lord-set/[/url]
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haha i fixed the effect its equal to the cards ATK, im debating the level change, and i usually don't read posts in others topics, but i will, just this once

:EDIT: ok ok! i'll fix the level!

[ragnarok1945]

not bad, Shattered Sky

change sacrifice to tribute

for the 2 effects you put there though, you should have said activate only ONE of the following, not both in the same turn

[Glogatha]

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1320343494' post='5614829']
not bad, Shattered Sky

change sacrifice to tribute

for the 2 effects you put there though, you should have said activate only ONE of the following, not both in the same turn
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ahh! raggy! you remembered me! lol

ok i changed them, i thought it said only one, but oh well thanks, and i don't even know why i said sacrifice lol

thaks! <3

[ragnarok1945]

Of course I remember

pic looks like it's from an anime, but I can't put my finger on it........