Apocalypse Cards Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 I want honest opinions, but I will report any rude or a-hole posts, as they will not be tolerated. I do want ratings, corrections, and opinions for these and new cards for this set. If anybody can tell me how to do spoilers, that would be greatly appreciated. I will now Begin with the 7 Sins: [spoiler=Lust:] [spoiler=Normal-] [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters You can send 2 cards from your hand or field to the grave, negate damage to your life points each time. This card cannot be destroyed in battle. Once per turn when this card would be destroyed pay 1000 life points to negate it's destruction.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Demon Lord-] [img]http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + "Lust" This card cannot be destroyed in battle. Pay 1000 life points to negate a spell or trap that destroys cards on the field except this card.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Envy:] [spoiler=Normal-] [img]http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters While this card is in defense position no other monster on you side of the field can be targeted. This card cannot be destroyed in battle, if you pay 500 Life Points when it would be destroyed.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Demon Lord-] [img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + "Envy" While this card is on the field, no other card can be targeted by effects of spells, traps, or monster effects. This card can only be destroyed by battle.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Wrath:] [spoiler=Normal-] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn, send one card from your hand or 1 set spell or trap card to the grave, to destroy 1 card on the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Demon Lord-] [img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + "Wrath" During your Main Phase, if you have at least 6 cards in your hand and/or on the field excluding this card, send all cards on the field and your hand except this card to the grave, the turn you use this effect, this monster cannot attack.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Pride:] [spoiler=Normal-] [img]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4545/103875k.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters You can negate and destroy 1 summon, spell, trap, or monster effect by lowering this card's level by 1. increase this cards attack and defense by 200x this cards level.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Demon Lord-] [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/7480/103875z.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + "Pride" This card's attack is equal to 500x the number of cards on the field. When this card leaves the field, you can discard a number of cards from your hand and for every 2 banish 1 card on your opponent's field and add 1 card from your grave to your hand.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Sloth:] [spoiler=Normal-] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this monster is summoned it is in defense position. Once per turn, you can send 1 card in your hand to the grave to special summon a "Sloth Token" (Lv.1/Dark/Fiend/Atk0/Def2000) to your side of the field in defense position.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Demon Lord-] [img]http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6181/103875r.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + "Sloth" When this monster is summoned you can tribute monsters on your side of the field to increase this monster's defense by 500 for each tribute. The attack and defense of all cards on the field are switched.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Gluttony:] [spoiler=Normal-] [img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters For every Standby Phase that this monster is face-up on your side of the field, gain 500 Life Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Demon Lord-] [img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + "Gluttony" When this monster destroys another monster, it is banished. This monster gains gains 500 attack points for each card banished by this card's effect.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Greed:] [spoiler=Normal-] [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters While this monster is face-up on your side of the field during your Draw Phase, draw an extra card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Demon Lord-] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/7858/103875.jpg[/img] 2 Tuners + "Greed" When this card destroys another monster, the destroyed monster is equipped to this card. This card gains 500 attack and defense for each monster equipped to this card. When this card with cards equipped would be destroyed destroy all equipped cards instead.[/spoiler][/spoiler] Edit-Added Demon Form Greed and finished updating pictures for all the others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 hmmm, some pics could be better, but pics don't really matter, umm, they can't be destroyed...which makes things a lil more overpowered...like, envy is way strong, hhhmmmmm ok Wrath: she is super abusible, like, i could just keep binging her back.. i like envy a lot...but...sin lord envy...umm i love it but, negating the traps is a lil much you think? overall, some of the cards are really good, others not so much... oh and pride ocg fix: You can negate and destroy 1 summon, spell, trap, or monster effect by lowering this card's level by 1. increase this cards attack and defense by 200x this cards level. i know i didn't say much, hope it helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 for Lust the LP negation of damage should only last for 1 turn, not permanently similarly the 1000 LP pay to prevent it from being destroyed you should only be allowed to use that once per turn Wrath is not too much different from XYZ Dragon Cannon's effect for Sloth, you forgot to list the atk power of the token Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 Okay for Demon Lord Envy, do you have any ideas to balance him out more to make him less OP'ed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 you can start by taking out the no other card can be targeted while this is face up on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 I have edited some changes and wish to know if that is better. BTW anyone know how to do spoilers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 That's not what I meant. You were supposed to say just Demon Lord Envy can't be targeted by your opponent's card effects don't make all your other monsters immune to it too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 No I did not make him immune to any card effects except those that destroy, any card effects except those that destroy work on him. He prevents other cards from being targeted by card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 I have added Demon Lord Pride! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 4, 2011 Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 so for Pride it'll need at least 7 cards to be powerful enough discarding effect isn't all that useful, since you won't have more than 3 usually Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 Okay then what would you recommend? It gets hard for me to come up with original effects after making about 20 decks worth of cards. I would like the effect of Pride to have something to do with Pride in some way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 4, 2011 Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 just make it instead of 500 per card, make it 700 per card, it'll get the atk high faster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 Okay I was wondering about that since that card can have up to 11,000 attack points as it includes the opponent's field as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 yeah well you go that high it's obviously going to be OTK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Updated-added both forms of Gluttony and the normal form of Greed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 for Greed you might want to limit how many times you can do that This is exactly the reason why everyone does everything they can to draw more, so maybe limit it to a certain number of times you can do this per duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Most of the pictures suck. Immunity effects are all broken. OCG is terrible. ATK and DEF stats are off the charts wacky. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 I don't like people who only post to talk s***, I don't mind rating and stuff f you have something that builds on the discussion, if you don't like you obviously don't Kato. I don't want to know you even exist! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Apocalypse Cards, will another addition be up here soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Yes I have [s]2[/s] 1 more that I am working on and I have a fusion-like one that I have in the works. Greed you see there is meant to have a short term effect as these guys the goal is to upgrade them. Greed's effect was decided by a friend as I couldn't think of a greedy effect lol. I am always looking for ideas or pictures for new cards for this set, which is so far I am only going to really do monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kato_Zenamara Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 [quote name='Apocalypse Cards' timestamp='1320526824' post='5619666'] I don't like people who only post to talk s***, I don't mind rating and stuff f you have something that builds on the discussion, if you don't like you obviously don't Kato. I don't want to know you even exist! [/quote] Cards that are beyond repair I don't bother posting in-depth descriptions about. And sorry to tell you, but you apparently DO know I exist, since you replied to me. But if you're begging for a "real" review: Lust: Why is this WATER? Makes no sense. "Send 2 cards" - Send them where? To the moon? So, this card can negate damage, can't be destroyed by battle, and has a minimal cost that lets you negate its destruction even if it would be destroyed? And has 2500 ATK? As Sesame Street says, "One of these things does not belong." Take out the destruction negater and the ass-high ATK. Demon Lust: Again, why is this WATER? Hmm.. a 3000 ATK monster that can't be destroyed by battle, and lets you pay 1000 lp to negate a card that would destroy something you control(i.e. this card)? Again, lets listen to Sesame Street. ATK needs to go WAAAAAAY down if you're keeping the effects. If you're keeping the ATK, then it loses the immunity to battle destruction. Level 12? I don't think so. Know what constitutes Level 12? Cards of a godly level, and equally godly summoning conditions. Wanna know whats a level 12? Red Nova Dragon, Shooting Quasar Dragon, Dragon Master Knight, etc. This is a level 10 card at best. Envy: Hmm... 3000 DEF, and when its in defense position, its the only thing on your field that can be targeted? So its the only thing that can be attacked, it stops all BTHs, Solemn Warnings, and pretty much anything else that isn't stupid. Oh, but wait, it can't be destroyed by battle either? So this thing is like a mega lightning rod that never dies? Sesame Street speaks words of wisdom again. Lower the ATK and make the effect viable only while in attack potion, NOT defense. Demon Envy: Hmmmm, so its got 4000 f***ing atk, is the only thing that can be targeted by any kind of effect, and can't be destroyed by them in any scenario? Guess what buddy, that don't fly. Fix everything about this card, including the level, which I've been over with Demon Lust. Wrath: So, you can send a card from your hand OR your backrow? But wait, send them where? Will they be joining the cards sent from Lusts' cost on the moon? Demon Wrath: Oh lawdy lawdy. So if you have any decent, general game state (6 cards or more in your hand or on the field, combined), you have to ditch them all? Oh, but wait, it effects the [i]opponent's field too[/i]. So this card rewards you with a free 3600 direct attic for having a game state that you should probably have at any given point in the game? Oh, and fix the level. Pride: What an atrocity. Its a level 8, if you hadn't noticed, with 2000 ATK and an ATK gaining effect. So you can summon it with 3600 ATK, and by merely losing 200 ATK, it can negate anything your opponent does? Oh, thats COMPLETELY balanced and fair. Demon Pride: What would make you even think of creating this card? For one, "XX00" is NOT a valid ATK number. It should be "?". Secondly, it gains 700 ATK for EVERY card on the field? Even if your opponent has a standard field (a monster and 2 back row), thats 2800 ATK alone, not to count anything you would have. That alone is terribly broken and needs to be all but removed, but wait, theres MORE!? If it leaves the field (by any means), you can discard any number of cards to [i]banish[/i] any card(s) your opponent controls, 1 for every 2 cards discarded? But theres EVEN MORE! You get to add the same number of cards back to your hand from the graveyard. So, not only is it -0 mass field removal, you also essentially get to pick your hand. Plus, level 12 again. Sloth: Ok, so its summoned in DEF position. It has 3000 DEF. Thats not a wall at all. Oh, but wait, you can discard a card to summon a token with 2000 DEF? Oh, why summon my weak little glow-up bulb to try and synchro next turn, when I can just discard it now, get a level 4 token, and then bring it back for a super mega synchro? Demon Sloth: Oh, just wow. So, if you played normal Sloth even remotely right, then you'll have FOUR tributes for this (the tokens). So, thats... 5000 DEF now? Oh thats not broken at all. Oh, but wait, the DEF and ATK are SWITCHED!? But not just for this, for EVERY card? So my mighty Red Dragon Archfiend only has 2000 ATK now, and yours has a free 5000? How about no? And, again, the level problem. Gluttony: Oh it gives you 500 lp, thats like Magical Android so thats... NOPE. EVERY standby phase? You realize this includes your opponent's AND yours, so thats essentially a free 1000 lp a turn. Oh, but it has 2500 DEF too. At least Android only has 2400 ATK, so popular synchros and xyz like Utopia and Stardust can kill it dead. But nope, this guy has 2500 DEF, so they can't do squat to your lp gaining machine. Demon Gluttony: A 3000 ATKer who not only banishes everything he kills, but gains 500 ATK every time he does so? B-R-O-K-E-N, Whats the spell? Broken! Not to mention his level 12 level. Greed: No, just hell no. 2 cards every draw phase? Do I even NEED to say anything about this? Oh, and it has 2600 DEF? Good luck running THAT over with anything you might have. Especially if you have ANY of your other spawns on the field. Mr. Envy would combo with this card reeeeeeal nice, wouldn't it? Demon Greed: Don't even bother. Just, don't. I'm predicting some bullshit along the lines of "draw 3" or even "draw 4" cards during your draw phase. Maybe even another 3000 ATK monster? You seem to love those. Oh, and it better not be a level 12. Overall, you've decided to give all of these cards the most broken effects you can possibly think of, as well as impossibly easy summoning conditions, no restrictions on their effects, AND massive ATK/DEF stats that insure they can't be removed from the field. Oh, wait, they're based on the Seven Deadly Sins, so its ok if they're OP'ed. NOT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 No I was trying to do a thing similar to Red Dragon Archfiend/Red Nova Dragon with them meaning 12 star would be correct!I have updated the cards and took into account some of what you said Kato, but since you truly are an a-hole I doubt you will approve as proven by your posts in this thread already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 [quote name='Apocalypse Cards' timestamp='1320532477' post='5619856'] Yes I have [s]2[/s] 1 more that I am working on and I have a fusion-like one that I have in the works. Greed you see there is meant to have a short term effect as these guys the goal is to upgrade them. Greed's effect was decided by a friend as I couldn't think of a greedy effect lol. I am always looking for ideas or pictures for new cards for this set, which is so far I am only going to really do monsters. [/quote] which sites have you looked in terms of pics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocalypse Cards Posted November 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 Truthfully I have been using Google to find pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 then use imageshack or something, those are usually better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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