i AM ra Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 is god a good idea to make???? tell me what you think? i cant get it to stop posting bes [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9383/509291.jpg[/img][img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9383/509291.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9383/509291.jpg[/img][img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9383/509291.jpg[/img][img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9383/509291.jpg[/img][img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9383/509291.jpg[/img][img]ht[img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9383/509291.jpg[/img] [img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Set%20god%20of%20Chaos&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Dark&level=12&magictraptype=None&rarity=Ultra%20Rare&picture=http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/509291/911543689.jpg&set1=&set2=&inset=false&type=God%20&description=Can%20attack%20all%20monsters%20in%20play%20at%20once%20he%20gains%20500%20attack%20for%20each%20monster%20he%20kills%20and%20gains%20100%20attack%20for%20each%20unused%20spot%20on%20the%20enemy%20board.%20&circulation=&atk=9000&def=4500&creator=Thomas&year=2011&serial=66666666[/img][[img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Horus%20the%20god%20of%20ruler%2C%20law%2C%20and%20war&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=12&magictraptype=None&rarity=Secret%20Rare&picture=http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/509291/828780219.jpg&set1=&set2=&inset=false&type=God&description=Horus%20can%20gain%201000%20attack%20for%201%20turn%20he%20can%20also%20destroy%20your%20top%205%20cards%20as%20long%20as%20you%20have%20more%20than%206000%20life%20points.%20he%20can%20call%20isis%20out%20if%20you%20gain%20give%20up%204%20monsters&circulation=&atk=9000&def=5000&creator=Thomas&year=2011&serial=11111111[/img] [img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Ra%20the%20God%20of%20the%20sun&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Fire&level=12&magictraptype=None&rarity=Secret%20Rare&picture=http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/509291/539858688.jpg&set1=&set2=&inset=false&type=God&description=He%20gains%20500%20defense%20for%20each%20fire%20monster%20in%20your%20graveyard.%20he%20is%20reborn%20each%20time%20you%20kill%207%20enemy%20monsters.%20No%20gods%20can%20attack%20him%20&circulation=&atk=9000&def=%3F%3F%3F%3F&creator=Thomas&year=2011&serial=9999999[/img][img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Osiris%20god%20of%20the%20underworld&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Divine&level=12&magictraptype=None&rarity=Ultra%20Rare&picture=http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/509291/709153866.jpg&set1=&set2=&inset=false&type=God%20effect&description=All%20other%20dark%20monsters%20gain%201000%20attack%20when%20he%20is%20out%20and%20can%20come%20back%20from%20the%20graveyard%20for%201%20turn%20after%205%20%20%20%20enemy%20turns%20&circulation=&atk=9000&def=6000&creator=Thomas&year=2011&serial=888888[/img][img]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=isis%20the%20goddess%20of%20magic&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=12&magictraptype=None&rarity=Ultra%20Rare&picture=http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/509291/131093811.jpg&set1=&set2=&inset=false&type=God%20&description=Can%20create%20normal%20monster%201900%20attack%200%20defense%20token%20once%20per%20game%20and%20can%20attack%20the%20enemy%20life%20points%20if%20they%20have%205%20monsters.%20%20gains%20300%20attack%20for%20eacn%20enemy%20light%20monster.Can%20not%20be%20killed%20by%20a%20spell%20or%20trap.&circulation=&atk=8000&def=6000&creator=Thomas&year=2011&serial=77777777[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dylan11932 Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 I don't mean to sound harsh, but what exactly where you thinking? The illistrations don't look very professional, and I'm inclined to say not very appealing graphically either. Also, the full links appearing beneath the cards should be edited out, as it takes up to much space and looks unweildy at best. I guess as a made-up monster it could pass, but 8,000 for ATK and DEF not being a special-summoned monster is unrealistic and somewhat OP. On another note, monsters are NEVER referred to as "he" in card effects, and "GOD" is not an archetype. I do like the Ra picture though, looks nice. All in all, lots to work on. I suggest the forum topic on OCG for starters. Hope this helped, I'm viewing your work objectively and judging it based on quality, not your personal skill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i AM ra Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 yeah i drop all of them down to 7000 or less atk/def so far i cant find a better image of bes and i made it harder to get them out. [img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9383/509291.jpg[/img] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/9383/509291.jpg[/img] [img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/9383/509291.jpg[/img] [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/9383/509291.jpg[/img] [img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/9383/509291.jpg[/img] [img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/9383/509291.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dylan11932 Posted November 6, 2011 Report Share Posted November 6, 2011 A bit better- still need work though. I would recommend you browse the forum topic for 'official' Konami OCG as-of 2011. I think you'll find a great deal of help there as well. However, as custom-deck cards- these could go over quite well. Liking the improvements, just keep them up and you'll be A-OK in no time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 7, 2011 Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 Okay, I guess these will require a lot of fixing. First off, I suggest when you make new cards, you edit your first post and put them there, that way people don't have to look through the comments to find them. Second, to help others help you, please post the card effects below the cards so that we can change mistakes we should find. For now, I suggest looking at other cards that exist now to understand the maximum attack or defense or good effects a card can have without being considered overpowered. Otherwise, no numbered rating yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i AM ra Posted November 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2011 Ok i will try to make more real cards. Thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted November 8, 2011 Report Share Posted November 8, 2011 am not the best at OCG but try for Ra ''This card cannot be normal summoned or set.This card can only be special summoned by banishing 15 FIRE monsters from your graveyard.This Monster gains 500 ATK points for each FIRE monster in your graveyard'' for the first part but i like those pics u used.And how can u summon he with the second effect while the first says you cannot summon he exccept by banishing 15 fire monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 9, 2011 Report Share Posted November 9, 2011 [quote name='david ice' timestamp='1320769637' post='5626174'] am not the best at OCG but try for Ra ''This card cannot be normal summoned or set.This card can only be special summoned by banishing 15 FIRE monsters from your graveyard.This Monster gains 500 ATK points for each FIRE monster in your graveyard'' for the first part but i like those pics u used.And how can u summon he with the second effect while the first says you cannot summon he exccept by banishing 15 fire monsters [/quote] This card cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned or set.This card can only be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned by banishing 15 FIRE monsters from your [b]G[/b]raveyard.This [b]card [/b]gains 500 ATK [s]points[/s] for each FIRE monster in your graveyard[b].[/b] Fixed. And also, on topic of the actual cards, "God" is not a type, consider using "Divine-Beast" or "Dragon" or others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i AM ra Posted November 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2011 i think i got it better Is he still over powered? i made some dragon cards that i think a lot more real tell me if you want me to post them [img]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9383/509291.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summed or set.This card can only be Special Summed by banishing 15 fire monsters From your Graveyard.This card gains 500 Def for each monster in your graveyard. Ra is reborn each time you kill 7 enemy monsters.No god/Divine Beast can attack him. Can be played without a host Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jazz Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 [quote name='i AM ra' timestamp='1320987870' post='5632244'] i think i got it better Is he still over powered? i made some dragon cards that i think a lot more real tell me if you want me to post them [img]http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9383/509291.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summed or set.This card can only be Special Summed by banishing 15 fire monsters From your Graveyard.This card gains 500 Def for each monster in your graveyard. Ra is reborn each time you kill 7 enemy monsters.No god/Divine Beast can attack him. Can be played without a host [/quote] It's still pretty hard to get on the field (because 15 fire monsters doesn't come from nowhere) and I don't understand what you mean by "host", or that he is reborn when you destroy (destroy, NOT kill) 7 of your opponent's (of your opponent's, NOT enemy) monsters. Keep working, I admire your perseverance. Also, when you add new cards, click "edit" at the bottom of your first post to put the card there. That way people don't need to scroll all the way down to the bottom to see your latest version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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