♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 [center][size=5]Edited version is below. The edit is unbolded and underlined.[/size][/center] [center][IMG]http://i39.tinypic.com/15zrtzs.jpg[/IMG][/center] [center][i][b]While your opponent controls 2 or more monsters and you control no monsters: Target and Banish 1 monster your opponent control; Special Summon 1 monster from your hand [/b][u]whose Level is lower [/u][b]than the Banished monster's.[/b][/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 don't quite see why you said it MUST be a lower level why not say lower than or equal to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dylan11932 Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 I don't mean to be a stickler, but for the most professional effect, I think [b][i]Target and Banish 1 monster your opponent control; [/i][/b]should read: [b][i]Target and Banish 1 monster your opponent controls, and[/i][/b] Not sure if I'm 100% correct on that spelling, but it just makes it aesthetically more pleasing. ---I Don't want to sound nitpicky, just some grammatical criticism to save you any harassment from anybody else down the road. On another note, I think this card is somewhat usable, though I personally would not use it due to my very dragon-centric spell card set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 It doesn't much need to be able to. If you banish a level 8 monster, you can still Special Summon a Level 7. Anyways, it's more likely you'll summon a lower level monster as their more useful than the higher levels in the Main Deck. Can't summon BLS-EotB or CS with this so, doesn't much matter. Decent enough w/ Banishing and SS [quote name='dylan11932' timestamp='1320362328' post='5615613'] I don't mean to be a stickler, but for the most professional effect, I think [b][i]Target and Banish 1 monster your opponent control; [/i][/b]should read: [b][i]Target and Banish 1 monster your opponent controls, and[/i][/b] Not sure if I'm 100% correct on that spelling, but it just makes it aesthetically more pleasing. ---I Don't want to sound nitpicky, just some grammatical criticism to save you any harassment from anybody else down the road. On another note, I think this card is somewhat usable, though I personally would not use it due to my very dragon-centric spell card set. [/quote] You're edit changes the effect. I have it as the Targeting and banishing being the cost. It neither retracts nor adds to the aesthetics and there wont be any annoyances with OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dylan11932 Posted November 3, 2011 Report Share Posted November 3, 2011 Yes, I just noticed that...you're right, people probably arent as OCG OCD as me. Sorry to u[font="Calibri"][size="3"][color="#000000"]nnecessarily correct you.[/color][/size][/font] [font="Times New Roman"][size="3"][color="#000000"] [/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2011 It's fine. People tend to make edits that they believe are correct that may not be correct. Bump~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 LLD, you get this pic from Jazin as well? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 No, this one I found myself. These days I rarely ever go to Jazin's site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 5, 2011 Report Share Posted November 5, 2011 there's no updates on there anymore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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