First attempt at a fusion monster

[Jackel The Mad]

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Lore:Search your deck for 3 Level 4 monster and send them to the graveyard to Fusion Summon 1 "Necro Reborn" from your extra deck.Instead of sending this card to the graveyard remove it from play.

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Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Fusion Summoned by the effect of "Graveyard". Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Zombie Type monster from your deck to the field in defense mode.This card gains 500 Atk and Def for every Zombie monster on the field.

OCG fixed would awesome

[Chaotic Angel]

Necro Reborn: Lore = This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Fusion Summoned by the effect of "Graveyard". Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 [b]L[/b]evel 4 or lower Zombie Type [b]M[/b]onster from your [b]D[/b]eck to the [b]F[/b]ield in [b]D[/b]efense [b]M[/b]ode.This card gains 500 A[b]TK[/b] and D[b]EF[/b] for every Zombie [b]M[/b]onster on the [b]F[/b]ield.

Graveyard: Lore = Search your [b]D[/b]eck for 3 Level 4 [b]M[/b]onster[b]s[/b] and send them to the [b]G[/b]raveyard. [s]to[/s] Fusion Summon 1 "Necro Reborn" from your [b]E[/b]xtra [b]D[/b]eck. [b]This card is Banished instead of being sent to the Graveyard[/b].

Hope the above fixes help.... Although, I haven't been playing Yu Gi Oh! for a fair while...

EDIT: Good attempt, though.

[Jackel The Mad]

thank you

[ragnarok1945]

for Reborn it'd be better if you made the lv4 or lower zombie monster get summoned from the graveyard (since Zombie monsters like being in the graveyard more)

[Worm Victory]

Necro reborn Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Fusion Summoned by the effect of "Graveyard". [b]Once per turn,[/b] you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower [b]Zombie-Type[/b] monster from your deck to the field in [b]Face-up[/b] defense [b]position[/b]. This card gains 500 [b]ATK and DEF[/b] for every[b] Zombie-Type[/b] monster on the field.

Graveyard Lore: [s]Search your deck for[/s] [b]Send 3 Level 4 monsters[/b] [s]and send them to the graveyard[/s] [b]from your Deck to the Graveyard[/b] to Fusion Summon 1 "Necro Reborn" from your Extra Deck. Instead of sending this card to the [b]Graveyard, Banish it.[/b]

THe Fusion monster had a few words/hyphens to be corrected/added.
Graveyard had to be slightly reworded to fit correct OCG.
Crossed out words are previous words needed to be changed and Bolded words are the Correct way to phrase them.
"Remove from play" is now called "banished", or as a future tense "banish"

I personally Don't like these cards so i rate them as a 6/10. Effort and I like Zombie monsters.