Grey-Eyes Chain Dragon

[Master Hyperion]

[img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5881/1204k.jpg[/img]
[quote]Once per turn, during either player's turn, if a Monster Effect would be activated: You can negate the activation of that monster and that face-up monster has its effect negated until the End Phase. Also, until the End Phase of a turn that this card negated a Monster Effect, if the negated effect can be activated, you can activate it as this card's effect.[/quote]

Orginally planned for a fanfic, but I can't write stories at all .__.

[dylan11932]

OCG may need checking up on, but lately I'm trying to be less of a stickler about that kind of thing. All in all, nice graphically, doesn't seem too OP in my opinion- though the background of the monster could be changed to better fit the name of the monster. Just friendly advice from another cardmaker.

[Anti-Apocryphal]

Seems a little boring, but useful, unless that monster involves you sacrificing Life Points in a situation where you have a low amount. The OCG is a little off; I can't name it all but right off the bat:

'Monster Effect' > 'monster effect'

I think.

Anyways, good picture, although I think I see red eyes. xD

[7.25/10]

[ragnarok1945]

temporary and specific skill drain effect initially

siphons off the effect of the monster, nothing new, but it should work

8/10

[Worm Victory]

Once per turn, during either player's turn[b],[/b] if a Monster Effect would be activated[b], [/b]You can negate the activation of that monster[b]'s effect[/b] and[s] that face-up monster has[/s] its effect [b]is[/b] negated until the End Phase. Also, until the End Phase of[b] the[/b] turn that this card[b]'s effect[/b] negated [b]another[/b] Monster[b]'s[/b] Effect, if the negated effect can be activated, you [b]may[/b] activate it as this card's effect.

Some corrections imo that were needed.

[Anti-Apocryphal]

[quote name='Dread689' timestamp='1320493448' post='5618568']
Once per turn, during either player's turn[b]:[/b] [b]I[/b]f a [b]m[/b]onster [b]e[/b]ffect would be activated[b]:[/b][b] Y[/b]ou can negate the activation of that monster[b]'s effect[/b] [s]and that face-up monster has its effect [b]is[/b] negated[/s] until the End Phase. [s]Also,[/s] [b]U[/b]ntil the End Phase of[b] the[/b] turn that this card[b]'s effect[/b] negated [b]another[/b] Monster[b]'s[/b] Effect[b]:[/b] [b]I[/b]f the negated effect can be activated, you [b]can[/b] activate it as this card's effect.

Some corrections imo that were needed.
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I fixed it, as I know a little bit more about the newer OCG.