Megayanma Posted February 18, 2008 Report Share Posted February 18, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Removing From Play one Monster with "Thirteen Blades" in its card name from your Graveyard. If this card attacks, flip a coin and call it. If you call it right, choose to activate one of these effects.-Your opponent selects one Monster on the field. If it is under his/her control, as long as it remains face-up on his/her side of the field, decrease the selected Monster's ATK by 800 points. If it is under your control, as long as it remains face-up on your side of the field, increase the selected Monster's DEF by 800 points.-Discard two cards from your hand to destroy one Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field. Please comment and rate. PWEETY PWEASE? BTW, this was an entry for Card Maker Shinigami's and bhim's threads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 I'm very sad about this, but I have to bump already. If I don't, this will be on the second page in no time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 This is probably the closest card I have seen to perfection.There's really nothing to say in my point of view, other than keep up the excellent work. +1 Rep for you. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG *continues for 12 millenia*! THE BEST FREAKIN' CARD YOU'VE SEEN!? THANK YOU! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 nice card 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG *continues for 12 millenia*! Yet again, yes. Thank you, Ruby. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Your welcome. The effect, isn't your best, but still remains unique and amazing, which really balances the idea of this card. If you need any help with anything, or if you have any questions, feel free to private message me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 What, is this like the 4, 567, 201, 613th you've said that? Yes, i've been counting. Jk. You don't think this is my best effect? I personally think the other effects of my cards fail compared to this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Well, it's just my opinion.I'm happy to hear that you're very confident, and that you're glad to stand up to a low ranking member like me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axiom_Nor Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 SWEET!!!!!!!I LOVE THE ATK!!!!9.8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Heh. Thanks. I was inspired by Reaper of the Cards, I believe it was. It has like 830 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Need to bump this again or it'll be lost. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 sticking it to the man with your ATK points,Pretty sweet.Good effect,but I think if they selected one of your monsters,it should gain ATK. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 It does gain attack. Read the effect a bit more closely. Thanks for the rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Pretty good! oOb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 doesn't your monster gain defense,or their monster loses attack,I don't see anything about gaining ATK,but you're welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Really really good! 10/10 but whats with the attack? 1730 does not look right snyway well done :) rep up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Yay, thank you! Oh, and Phoenix, I forgot it said DEF instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Very, very nice card, infact i love it, keep it up. 9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 You're the lowest rating so far...BEGONE WITH YOU! Jk, thanks a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 I like it IO like the effect, art (where did you get it anyway), and ATK 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Thank you! The art is Tehodis's and the holoing was done by Orginization_XII. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 I'm going to be brutally honest when I review this card. Don't take it personal because I'm not attacking you in particular, although it may seem like I am, but I'm critiquing this card from a standpoint of a person who is building a deck. The artwork is nice and the holographic works is good but this card's effects are pretty useless. Especially, when you consider what cards are available and what people run in their decks. Onto the in-depth analysis of this card. Saying you got the coin toss right let us look at the two effects. The first effect is pretty worthless and I don't think anyone would choose it over the second effect. Truly look at the first effect of this monster. Your opponent chooses one monster on the field and if it's their monster, the ATK gets reduced by 800 points... Tell me why an opponent would do this to their own monster? The only situations I can think of at the moment is that the opponent has a Crush Card Virus waiting for you or if their monster has a high DEF and the ATK was low to begin with. Also, this effect is permanent, provided this card remains on the field. So either stat boost/decrease can be stacked on a single monster. If the monster is yours you increase its DEF by 800. Well, I doubt your opponent would boost want to boost one of your monsters that has a high DEF in the first place. So really, it's a lose-lose situation for your opponent but it also doesn't give you any huge benefits. So what incentive does a player have in choosing this first effect? None at the moment. The second effect on the other hand is kind of appealing and is what wold make people use this monster in the first place. However, the cost to using this second effect is faaarrrr too high. Especially, when you consider other cards like Snipe Hunter where it has a similar effect, except better. Snipe Hunter can target any card on the field and use it's effect multiple times in one turn. So let's really evaluate this card. You have a 4 star 1730 ATK monster so it has semi-decent ATK power but considering how fast it is to get a 1800+ ATK monster on the field, it really doesn't hold any field presence and you can't expect to hold onto this monster for long. The higher ATK power means it can't be searched with Shining Angel, which is a big minus for it. In order to get any benefit from this card you need to ATK first meaning any monster destruction trap/quick-play spell/effect monster can take this card out. If the opponent doesn't have anything to take this card out then you have to gamble for the benefits of this card. The two benefits you get are okay at best but the conditions you need to meet in order to get these benefits is a total put off. Why bother using this card when there are plenty of other cards that have similar effects that are easier to get to work with less risk involved. If you are going to create a card that has a gamble effect, then you have to make the effects worth taking the risk. As it is right now I would not even consider using this card in any deck type. If you are looking for ways to improve upon this card I would change the ATK to 1500 or less so that it can be searched by Shining Angel. Next, I would completely rethink the first effect because there is no immediate reason to using this effect. If the ATK is lowered then ditch the cost of the second effect altogether OR lower the cost to 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 It may seem very weak now, but I will possibly continue this set and make support. The second effect's high cost was because I had it with no cost at first and Bhim/FrunxMomma/JerryFreelance said it was very broken. Thank you for the harsh rating and I will try to improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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