Valkyrus Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/YRAFINAL-1.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 fixed the lore a bit. bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 Spiffy. Id say it looks ok. The last bit of the lore seems kinda fishy. But I dont know how to change it so its probably ok. I like the art and the idea. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 you may need to state what happens if the # of cards is odd certainly ruins the element of surprise no matter which way you cut it, so that's very good idea wise you get 8.9/10 for this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1321152372' post='5636516'] you may need to state what happens if the # of cards is odd certainly ruins the element of surprise no matter which way you cut it, so that's very good idea wise you get 8.9/10 for this [/quote] the number of cards being odd is impossible...your opponent picks up a number of cards they have in their hand. So that automatically makes the combined number even. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 fixed some more OCG errors , bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 63 views and 2 replies -_________- When this is actually one of the few creative cards on this place.. RC is dead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2011 Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1321159225' post='5636800'] the number of cards being odd is impossible...your opponent picks up a number of cards they have in their hand. So that automatically makes the combined number even. [/quote] Sorry I didn't read that part well, I take it back you going to have a support for this too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted November 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1321216623' post='5638308'] Sorry I didn't read that part well, I take it back you going to have a support for this too? [/quote] Well, it doesn't really need support, I made it with having it in mind as a staple for any Ritual-based decks. It can be SS'ed by itself or by any Ritual Spell, with the latter giving you a great strategical advantage over your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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crystalfeet Posted November 14, 2011 Report Share Posted November 14, 2011 Nice effect, but i wonder if the card's level might change due to the ritual spell used some ritual spells do state the total lv of the monster sacrifices required(example you could use the relinquished ritual and literally sacrifice only 1 card). So just do something to clear that. Otherwise a good and balanced effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted November 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2011 [quote name='crystalfeet' timestamp='1321252651' post='5640313'] Nice effect, but i wonder if the card's level might change due to the ritual spell used some ritual spells do state the total lv of the monster sacrifices required(example you could use the relinquished ritual and literally sacrifice only 1 card). So just do something to clear that. Otherwise a good and balanced effect. [/quote] Yes, that's one of the good things about it as well. The way I worded it, you can use relinquished's ritual and tribute only 1 level 1 or higher monster to Ritual Summon this card. The level matters only for when it's Special Summoned by its own effect. But even then, I don't think it's overpowered since to activate its effect this becomes at least a -1 / most often a -2, and it's very easily destroyed. And Rituals require a lot of cards so they're not very practical/fast in today's metagame. However, this works well in a Ritual-based deck and I'm sure it'd boost their overall power. Also, it could be easily SS'd by its own effect if you decide you want to make it a Big Eye fodder/or if you just need a beatstick. For example, Normal Summon Gagaga magician > use eff to make him level 7 > SS this > Xyz into Big Eye It has a lot of uses imo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalfeet Posted November 14, 2011 Report Share Posted November 14, 2011 True. Good work anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DestinyGame Posted November 14, 2011 Report Share Posted November 14, 2011 Which program did you use to make this card, can you tell me pls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted November 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2011 [quote name='shinkenger4ever' timestamp='1321274163' post='5640594'] Which program did you use to make this card, can you tell me pls. [/quote] photoshop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted November 15, 2011 Report Share Posted November 15, 2011 will you add another ritual here, Gandorator? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted December 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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