DSS Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 I made this card a few minutes agoplz rate and comment and tell me if i need to improve this card in anyway : OCG ,Grammar ect.Picture found: DeviantartOwner: OissionLink: http://oission.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Too powerful, and a lot of OCG errors. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 some OCG errorsGood Pic7.5 /10^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Too powerful' date=' and a lot of OCG errors. 6/10[/quote']how come its soo powerfull ,tell meOh and can you guys/girls comment some more on my card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 I love the picture, well done. But this card has 1 to the many OCG errors, still very nice effort. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dustinthewind91 Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 I like the Picture and the Effect, and i didn't think its too Powerfull. I like the Effect but there many OCG Errors correct them and then its a good card. The Name is ... mhm it gaves better names but Ok^^All in one i think the card ist not bad.7,6/10Â Greetz,Dustinthewind91 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakaron Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Yea last part is a bit overpowered, other than that, good job! Â 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 yeah. the last part is like mega burn 3 of them and you play torrential tribute! they take 6000! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 so what you guys are saying is that he is way too powerfull :|BTW a edited a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 ok here is the effecttell me plz what should I changeThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Special Summon this card by Removing From Play 2 Warrior-type monsters from your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned all monsters on bouth players fields become Zombie-type , increse this cards ATK and DEF by 200 for every Zombie-type monster on the field(exept this card). If this card is destroyed due to the effect of one of your Spell or Trap Cards , inflict 2000 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dominantruler007 Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 hhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmm......... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squall19 Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 i like it 8/10very nice pic and nice effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted February 19, 2008 Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Too powerful, good job though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2008 Thanks edited just againi think the OCG is better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 [align=center]Â OCG errorsGrammer errorsCool picCool effect=Â 7.8/10Â [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 The effect needs some rewording. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the man 11 Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 That card rocks!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 sweet 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 8/10...not too shabby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 ok i guess 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 thanks glad you guys like it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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