DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 Rate, hate, meditate (: Image credit for "Number 49 - Invisible" to Hengki24, on Deviantart dot com Image credit for "Number 9 - Descending Death" to Gorillaz [URL=http://yugico.com/user/17167-DropDeadDream/card/1000-ZAYN/3018-Number_49_-_Invisible][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/3018.jpg[/IMG][/URL] Text: 2 or more Level 3 monsters The Xyz Summoning of this card cannot be negated. Once per turn: You can detach one Xyz material from this card: This card cannot be targeted, and Spells or Traps cannot be activated in response to this card attacking, nor the activation of this card's effect, until the End Phase. This card gains 200 ATK for every Xyz material removed from this card. [url="http://yugico.com/user/17167-DropDeadDream/card/1000-ZAYN/3020-Number_9_-_Descending_Death"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/3020.jpg[/img][/url] Text: 2 Level 4 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card: Remove this card from play. Then, in the Battle Phase, Special Summon this card: Automatically declare an attack with this card: No effects can be activated in response to this attack. After damage calculation: Remove this card from play: Special Summon this card in the End Phase. Whenever this card is removed from play, the Xyz material remains attached. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 don't attach cards put it up the right way and then we'll rate it again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [center]That's cruel Rag, seeing as he said he couldn't figure it out.[/center] [center]1) Right click card in Card Creator, press Upload to Imageshack, copy and paste URL that appears below it into Notepad and when it comes time to post just paste the URL, the card should appear.[/center] [center]The 2nd card sounds like it returns to declare an attack, then instantly stops its attack by banishing itself.[/center] [center]The 1st card doesn't seem like it would be used much. Also, the word "action" is not used in Yugioh ^-^ Just say its "unaffected by the effects of other cards until the End Phase."[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [quote name='Gagaga Girl' timestamp='1322209922' post='5664306'] [center]That's cruel Rag, seeing as he said he couldn't figure it out.[/center] [center]1) Right click card in Card Creator, press Upload to Imageshack, copy and paste URL that appears below it into Notepad and when it comes time to post just paste the URL, the card should appear.[/center] [center]The 2nd card sounds like it returns to declare an attack, then instantly stops its attack by banishing itself.[/center] [center]The 1st card doesn't seem like it would be used much. Also, the word "action" is not used in Yugioh ^-^ Just say its "unaffected by the effects of other cards until the End Phase."[/center] [/quote] Thanks for the help, Gagaga, I'll try that . The second one's effect is supposed to mean it attacks, then after the attack is done, it is instantly removed from play, and the attack cannot be stopped by any effects. I'll fix that. And for the first one, it can be effected by card effects, such as equip spells. I meant that no effects can be activated as a result of anything done by this card, an attack, summon, or activation of effect. How would I word that in OCG? And plus, any tips you can give me to improve these? Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oh My Anubis! Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 We aren't supposed to attach cards, so we can't look at the cards yet. Anyway, where did you upload the Xyz cards? It can't be from this site. Albeit not being made from this site, it's nice to see something slightly out of the ordinary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [quote name='Oh My Anubis!' timestamp='1322241608' post='5664651'] We aren't supposed to attach cards, so we can't look at the cards yet. Anyway, where did you upload the Xyz cards? It can't be from this site. Albeit not being made from this site, it's nice to see something slightly out of the ordinary. [/quote] They were from Yugico dot com's card creator. I'm trying to fix it now.There, it's fixed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [center]Correct way to say it "If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards until the end of the Damage Step."[/center] [center]For effect monsters, just say something like "Monsters your opponent controls cannot activate their effect(s) during your Battle Phase."[/center] [center]Keep the "This card cannot be targeted by the effects of cards your opponent controls." clause. (Add opponent in there if you want to be able to Equip stuff to him)[/center] [center]The 2nd one is fixed ^-^ But why banish it after Damage Calc until End of Turn? I wouldn't really see much point in that, cool idea and such, but it would return with no material...[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [quote name='Gagaga Girl' timestamp='1322248535' post='5664935'] [center]Correct way to say it "If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards until the end of the Damage Step."[/center] [center]For effect monsters, just say something like "Monsters your opponent controls cannot activate their effect(s) during your Battle Phase."[/center] [center]Keep the "This card cannot be targeted by the effects of cards your opponent controls." clause. (Add opponent in there if you want to be able to Equip stuff to him)[/center] [center]The 2nd one is fixed ^-^ But why banish it after Damage Calc until End of Turn? I wouldn't really see much point in that, cool idea and such, but it would return with no material...[/center] [/quote] Oh, sh** I didn't realize that! I'll fix that now. xD Also, if I put the OCG like that, I couldn't right it all as one effect, which is how I need it to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [center]The Xyz Summoning of this card cannot be negated. Once per turn: You can detach one Xyz material from this card: This card cannot be targeted, and Spell or Traps cannot be activated in responce to this card attacking, until the End Phase.[/center] [center]This isn't strong enough to require 3 material...I would prefer 2. I would rather Xyz a Zenmaines even if this required 2 material, so no need for the third ^-^.[/center] [center]Put "2 or more Level 3 monsters" so you CAN use more if wanted.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [quote name='Gagaga Girl' timestamp='1322249565' post='5664973'] [center]The Xyz Summoning of this card cannot be negated. Once per turn: You can detach one Xyz material from this card: This card cannot be targeted, and Spell or Traps cannot be activated in responce to this card attacking, until the End Phase.[/center] [center]This isn't strong enough to require 3 material...I would prefer 2. I would rather Xyz a Zenmaines even if this required 2 material, so no need for the third ^-^.[/center] [center]Put "2 or more Level 3 monsters" so you CAN use more if wanted.[/center] [/quote] Yeah, I was thinking that I'd want 3 because doing it only 2 times didn't seem worth it, to me. But then I read the last sentence of your comment.... I didn't even know you could do that! Thank's, I'll change it now. And thanks for putting it in OCG, I seriously couldn't figure it out xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [center]No problem man XD[/center] [center]If it had more attack, like 2500, it would demand 3 material and the effect would be worth it. With Cyber Dragons being able to f*** this guy which required 3 of your monsters, it just seems inferior to each and every other Rank 3...[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 There, I think I'll finalize it like this. I had to add "nor the activation of this card's effect" to "Invisible" because I want it to be resistant not only when it is attacking, but beforehand as well.[quote name='Gagaga Girl' timestamp='1322250417' post='5665011'] [center]No problem man XD[/center] [center]If it had more attack, like 2500, it would demand 3 material and the effect would be worth it. With Cyber Dragons being able to f*** this guy which required 3 of your monsters, it just seems inferior to each and every other Rank 3...[/center] [/quote] Yeah, I made it "2 or more Level 3 monsters" instead. I don't want to boost it's ATK any, because most Rank 3 Xyz monsters are under 2000 anyway. Don't want to be OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [center]It would be cool though to gain 400 extra attack for each material after the 2nd one used.[/center] [center]I only stated the ATK gain incase you kept the material required at 3[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [quote name='Gagaga Girl' timestamp='1322251089' post='5665040'] [center]It would be cool though to gain 400 extra attack for each material after the 2nd one used.[/center] [center]I only stated the ATK gain incase you kept the material required at 3[/center] [/quote] Hmmm... interesting. How about this? "This card gains 200 ATK for every Xyz material that has been removed from it." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadDream Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 There, NOW I'm finalizing it haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 26, 2011 Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 ok now that the cards are here we can rate it 49 isn't really good for the atk gain, a bit too small to raise it high fast enough the detaching immunity isn't really too much a protection either for number 9 though, it just seems too recyclable of an effect especially with the no card effects can be activated when it attacks, it's too much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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