Signature unions

[Tymur Shayk]

A little added on to my Machine's of Rock Archtype. I however didn't want to bump it so I made a new topic with the new cards which are supposed to be the strongest or key cards of the XYZ and my custom made ABC archtype.

[b]A note on 'Union Disk'[/b], I applied the idea of having the field spell, change the appearance of the duel disk if it were played which explains its effect. Though it is not destroyed if you or your enemy plays a new Field Spell, you cannot place one on top of it since it still is taking up the space.

[b]A note on O-Omega Unionize[/b], Just for clarification, in order to summon this card, it must first be used as an equip spell as stated in the effect before activating the secondary effect of being able to special summon it to the field.

All image credit goes to .Buddha

positive / negative criticism welcome, OCG check appreciated.



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[center]Lore: This card can be Normal Summoned without Releasing. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to look at the bottom card of your Deck (shuffle your Deck afterwards). If it is a Union Monster: this card is treated as Field Spell. If not: add the selected card to your hand. This card is not destroyed if another Field Spell Card is played (the effects of the new Field Spell are still active as well as this card). As long as this card remains in your Field Spell Zone, monsters can be equipped with more than 1 Union Monster at a time. If this card is selected as a target by Card Effect, Banish this card.[/center]
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[center]Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card is treated as a Normal Spell Card while in your hand and Graveyard. you can equip this card to a face-up "A-Vocal Dragon" or "X-Head Cannon" you control, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, the equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and cannot be destroyed by Spell or Trap Card Effect. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.) As long as this card remains face-up in Attack Position on the field, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. This effect cannot be used more than once per turn.[/center]

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[center]Lore: "A-Vocal Dragon" + "X-Head Cannon" + "O-Omega Unionize"[/center]
[center]This card can only be Special Summoned from your Other Deck by Banishing the above cards on your side of the field. (You do not use "Polymerization"). If this card is Special Summoned successfully, destroy all cards on the field except this card. (card effects are not activated at this time). You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn this card is Special Summoned. You can discard 1 Union monster from your hand to destroy all cards on the field except this card. You must end your turn, when you activate this effect. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, Machine-Type monsters cannot be destroyed except by Battle.[/center]

[ragnarok1945]

good you put the lore up, otherwise it'd be a pain to read

for Union disk, you should have given it another effect in the 2nd sentence, if it's NOT a union monster. Just saying nothing happens, it's just plain boring

for Omega, the 1000 atk gain is good, not being able to be destroyed by ANY card effect is a bit too much

I mean yes you can't equip it to ANY monster, but still

as for the fusion

it has a neat nuking effect, but the 2nd to last sentence is too much. Nuking all the other cards on the field, well you didn't say you can't attack that turn either, so it's easy OTK setup

[crystalfeet]

AOX has that annoying extra ability " by discarding a union destroy all cards on the field" kinda overpowering and overwhelming. Remove it and then it's good to go.
9.5/10.

[ragnarok1945]

well I guess it really depends on 1 Q:

how many union monsters are kept in a typical deck nowadays?

[Tymur Shayk]

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well I guess it really depends on 1 Q:

how many union monsters are kept in a typical deck nowadays?
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Not many because there isn't many going around, which is why this is based off of my current cards and my custom made union monsters. I just have a love for machine / union monsters.

EDIT: updates coming to these cards soon due to feedback

EDIT2: Cards have been updated.

[ragnarok1945]

ok good you did say it can't attack once it activates its effect

even so I just don't know what that's going to leave your opponent with next turn or anything like that

what I'd also do is say the moment you activate the AOX Dragon cannon's effect, you have to end your turn IMMEDIATELY

that way you can't set anymore spells/traps and all that

[Tymur Shayk]

lol AOX is the only with real balance issues here, alright, I'll edit again in just a moment

EDIT: edited AOX

[ragnarok1945]

yeah ok that makes it a bit better now that machine monsters are still vulnerable to battle and all that

have to say though this is a first time I'm seeing X-Head Cannon being used without Y-Dragon Head or Z-Metal Tank.

you should try having like 2 more fusions up sometime later

one of them will use only Y-Dragon Head, the other uses only Z-Metal Tank.

[Tymur Shayk]

I plan too Ragnorak,

I already have effects and names for these monsters, even a fusion in "Written" cards that involves VWXYZ and my sub arch type in my realistic cards. Images are the only problem sadly.

[ragnarok1945]

you can't find good places for them?

The Z-Metal tank should be the easier one. Remember, that card's pic is relatively simple

[Tymur Shayk]

not a lot of people make pictures of the XYZ arch type or something even similar so I'm improvising. If know a place, that gives said images then please feel free to share and I'll gladly make the cards