kencat1 Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 Here it is: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 overpoweres DM and DMG and you should say"Dark Magician" and not "dark magician" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kencat1 Posted February 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 hmm... nobody ever likes anything i make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 His trying to give you advice to help you improv the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 hmm... nobody ever likes anything i make. don't worry you will make better cardsin time you will become better at card making ^_^you only have to improve on your OCGBTW cool pic 8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zakaron Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 Try, if you have any, reading a real yu-gi-oh card. They capitalize some things like the names of monsters, the words graveyard, trap, spell, special, normal, set, summon, summoned..some more I think but I don't want to go digging thru my old collection... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 well you should improve your cards. practice your OCG and your ability to make and manipulate effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 I agree all the way, and btw, your cards aren't horrible, people are just trying to give you advice to help you remake the card even better, that's what the forums are for! 1 - Loads of OCG errors...but I still have that problem even now.2 - Somewhat overpowered...who doesn't do that every-now-and-then.3 - Awesome picture, but you have to say stuff like I don't own this pic and blah blah blah4 - Don't worry, you will get better in due time... So all in all, I'd give you maybe a 6.5 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:/Jishin//Enigma/:. Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 just needs caps and better OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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