Occult / Demonic Set

[MysticalMystery]

This set is almost finished, but there are probably a substantial amount of OCG errors and improvements that can be made. All constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. If you have suggestion for possible new set cards, feel free to tell me. Thanks, and I hope you enjoy!

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[size=5][b]SPELLS:[/b][/size]

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Lore- During each of your end phases, tribute one fiend type monster from your hand or field. If you cannot do this, destroy this card. While this card is in play, all DARK monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF, and all LIGHT monsters lose 500 ATK and DEF. When a DARK monster you control destroys another monster by battle, you may activate one of the following effects:
1.) your opponent must discard the top card on their deck
2.) negate all damage to your opponent's life points. The difference between the destroyed monster and the attacking monster's ATK is added to your life points

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I know it's probably pretty overpowered, but I want to keep a card like it- I think the idea of sacrificing one of these giant dark demon monsters for a special effect is a good idea. Any suggestions on how it can become more realistic / balanced?

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Again, feedback is greatly appreciated, definitely reply below if you can offer some constructive criticism.

[ragnarok1945]

Charon is really good given how many monsters have low def compared to atk

Cloaked Minion though you may need to give some restrictions to the special summoned tokens

Dark Magistrate is meh for just stat determining effect and nothing more

Occult Mage is very good for spell negation like that, certainly better than Horus lv8 which takes a while to get out