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its my first card! -is excited-


Serenity Manning

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Just giving you a heads up, you need to have an image for your card if you want to post it in RC. If not, post it in Written Cards.

On to the effect, fairly simple, but nice for a newcomer. Seems pretty balanced. I think the right Card Grammar(OCG) is:

[b]When this card destroys a monster by battle; This card can attack again. This card cannot attack directly.[/b]

It's pretty good, just remember to find a pic next time. 8.5/10

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You don't need to worry about finding good pics, I can help you with that.

For starters, Deviantart is a nice place to find good images. Then of course, there's Jazin Kay's archive: [url="http://partneryahoo.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/?start=all"]http://partneryahoo.photobucket.com/albums/zz178/JazinKay/?start=all[/url]

Jazin's got a ton of images that are REALLY good looking. Hope this helps you out.

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Nice going man! Just to let you know, for some reason, the feature that allows us all to post pics from our PC's is somewhat broken.

So you could try posting the image to imageshack or some other image hosting website, then get the URL and use it!

I can give this a 7/10 for good grammer, reasonable effect, and overall realism of the card.

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1323137685' post='5689820']
pic aside, the effect should be ok

1750 atk isn't really much, so even if both attacks are direct ones it shouldn't be as easy to set up the OTK

in terms of finding a picture, just go to photobucket or something like that

the stats make it well suited for lv4, so I'll give this one 8.4/10 for your efforts
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Did you even read the effect? It can only attack twice if it destroys a card, and it [b]can't[/b] attack directly. Ever.

Anyway I like it. I prefer when cards have stats like this instead of ending with 00.
The picture thing doesn't matter because it isn't working now anyway.
Overall it's nice.
8/10

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It needs to lose the last bit which stops attacks. It's subpar otherwise, we have plenty of double attackers, and the ones that have this kind of effect that doesn't let it attack directly are all not used.

Otherwise it's a solid card with a lot of warrior support and good enough attack to let it run over stuff and get its effect. I commend that.

Also, if you aren't using pics, there's a written cards section that doesn't require them, you just need to write out all the information on the card, like the level and type of monster, etc.

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