Firestorm965 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 I'm new to this forum so please rate and crticize (constructive critcism only please) [img]http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5433/525530.jpg[/img] Effect: If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battel it gains 500 ATK until the end of the battel phase and can attack once again in a row Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 well 500 atk isn't really much so it's ok I guess to make it permanent the 2nd attack should also be fine, though I would still suggest one drawback in which the 2nd attack cannot be a DIRECT attack, otherwise it'll be easier OTK set up beyond that though, this is very good for a 1st card, OCG is very well done and all that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firestorm965 Posted December 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1323297256' post='5693832'] well 500 atk isn't really much so it's ok I guess to make it permanent the 2nd attack should also be fine, though I would still suggest one drawback in which the 2nd attack cannot be a DIRECT attack, otherwise it'll be easier OTK set up beyond that though, this is very good for a 1st card, OCG is very well done and all that [/quote] It isn't a permanent 500 Atk points. The 500 Atk boost only lasts untill the end of the battel phase. Thank you though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 hmm, my computer must have loaded that part wrong or something well even if it was it should be ok 1400 atk isn't much, you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firestorm965 Posted December 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1323297727' post='5693859'] hmm, my computer must have loaded that part wrong or something well even if it was it should be ok 1400 atk isn't much, you know [/quote] I know that 1400 ATK isn't much which is why I felt that it was justified to have this effect also for all I know you're computer loaded it right and my grammar is wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 well now it doesn't matter you clarified the effect, we'll leave it at that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 hmm, i like hehe though it wouldnt last long, it could be decent in the begining game 8/10 nice first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firestorm965 Posted December 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 [quote name='Glowfly' timestamp='1323298360' post='5693904'] hmm, i like hehe though it wouldnt last long, it could be decent in the begining game 8/10 nice first card [/quote] Thanks for the 8 And yeah I've been working on a set that he is part of so he's kinda just there not realy a big game winner (mostly just because I need a 4 star for the synchros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 so does this mean you'll add more here to make this into a set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgrug4 Posted December 7, 2011 Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 Add: [b]in a row[/b]. It makes a difference. Trust me Pic is pretty good for a first timer. OCG is outdated. A little errors. But you're learning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firestorm965 Posted December 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1323301717' post='5694095'] so does this mean you'll add more here to make this into a set? [/quote] [quote name='sgrug4' timestamp='1323301736' post='5694098'] Add: [b]in a row[/b]. It makes a difference. Trust me Pic is pretty good for a first timer. OCG is outdated. A little errors. But you're learning. [/quote] First of all I'll eighter post my progress here as I go or just wait and post in completed sets. The set should have around 40-55 cards I'm at about thirteen concepts done and three completly done Second I will edit my card soon thanks for the advice and my ocg is a little rusty but hey I'm learning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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