The Fall of Zero

[Euron]

Hello This is my first time actually posting about something I made.
I was on the Megaman wiki looking at things from Megaman Zero and came across the Pantheons and went "Hey, these could make a good YuGiOh deck.
And so it was done. I present, the "card pack", Fall of Zero.
I'll put the effects of monsters whose card effects are too small to read underneath them. :3


[img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/2944/200pxpantheonguardianjp.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/6599/200pxpantheonhunterjpgs.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/5373/200pxpantheonflyerjpgse.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3927/200pxpantheonacejpgset1.jpg[/img]
This card can be special summoned by tributing 1 face-up "Pantheon Flyer" on your side of the field. When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, put one counter on this card. If it would be destroyed by battle or by monster, spell, or trap card effects, the counter is removed instead. As long as this card has a counter, if it destroyed a monster your opponent controls, your opponent loses life points equal to half this cards original attack.

[img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/3448/200pxpantheonaquajpgset.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/8935/200pxmodifiedpaquajpgse.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4172/200pxpantheonbasejpgset.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/7435/200pxpantheonbomberjpgs.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/5499/200pxpantheoncorejpgset.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/1863/200pxpantheonwarriorjpg.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/6348/200pxpantheonfistjpgset.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/7717/200pxpantheonhammerjpgs.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5773/200pxpantheonhopperjpgs.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img806.imageshack.us/img806/8635/200pxpantheonzombiejpgs.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/9752/250pxrainbowdeviljpgset.jpg[/img]
This card can be special summoned by tributing 3 "Pantheon" monsters you control. Once per turn, you can special summon 1 "Devil Token" (Machine-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in face-up defense position. This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF for every "Devil Token" on the field. By discarding one card, sacrifice all face-up "Devil Tokens" you control
and inflict damage to your opponent's life points by the number of tokens destroyed x200.

[img]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/9654/300pxanubisnecromancess.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/5061/300pxhittitehottidejpgs.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/3109/300pxguardoroticjpgset1.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/6470/270pxhanumachinejpgset1.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5589/270pxmahaganeshariffjpg.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/5894/300pxblizzackstaggroffj.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/9272/250pxasurabasurajpgset1.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/5183/200pxglieyejpgset1fozse.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/2281/300pxherculiousanchortu.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/708/270pxharpuiapngset1fozs.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1285/150pxarmedphenomenonhar.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9757/270pxleviathanpngset1fo.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/829/150pxarmedphenomenonlev.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 Face-Up "Siren General- Fairy Leviathan" you control. Once per turn, by tributing one monster, you can take control of any attack position monsters your opponent controls. If this card destroys a defense position monster, it can attack again. If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you can special summon 1 "Siren General- Fairy Leviathan" from your graveyard.

[img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/9396/270pxfefnirpngset1fozse.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/7314/175pxarmedphenomenonfef.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing one "Fighter General- Fighting Fefnir" you control. This card is not effected by Effect Monster effects. When this card destroys an effect monster your opponent controls by battle, negate the effect and remove it from play. Then, search your opponents deck for any other effect monster with the same name, and remove them from play. When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, special summon 1 "Fighter General- Fighting Fefnir" from your graveyard.

[img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/5642/270pxphantompngset1fozs.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/1951/150pxarmedphenomenonpha.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 face-up "Shadow General- Hidden Phantom" on your side of the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of all Trap cards your opponent controls. Once per turn, if this card destroyed an opponent's monster by battle, your opponent loses life points equal to half the original attack of this monster. If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Shadow General- Hidden Phantom" from your graveyard.

[img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7779/270pxcopyx1jpgset1fozse.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/9366/300pxcopyx2jpgset1fozse.jpg[/img]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the hand by removing from play "Copy X- Ruler of Neo Arcadia" and "Neo Arcadia" from the field. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the total number of removed from play cards x800. You can sacrifice 500 Life Points to add 500 ATK and DEF to this card. This card cannot be destroyed by Effect Monster, Spell, and Trap cards. Once per turn, you can:
-Discard your entire hand to destroy all cards on the field except this card.
-Remove from play 1 Machine-type monster to draw 2 cards.
When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 1 "Copy X- Ruler of Neo Arcadia" from your Removed from play.

[img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/6093/427neoarcadialj4jpgset1.jpg[/img]

[Mr. guy]

Wow. Looks great!

[Nu-Mou Knight]

Ooh yay, another Zero fan The cards don't look half bad, wording is good overall. Some things to note:
When you use Attack and Defense stats, just type ATK or DEF respectively. Only a problem with the early cards.
Remember to capitalize phrases like "Special Summon", "Defense Position", etc.
When you use numbers (ie.: Choose one monster your opponent controls) just use the numeral instead of spelling it out.
"Remove from Play" is "Banish" now, and Banished cards are placed in the "Banished Zone". It's not too new, so it is expected knowledge.
Neo Arcadia doesn't need dashes for multiple effects. If they're not at all related through a singular target, it's assumed they're separate.
For effects like X Seraph, be sure to specify whether they can all be used once or only one. If only one, you'd "select and apply 1 of the following effects". If it's the former though, you could also save space and remove the bullets, then just put "Once per turn" before each.

They're pretty good for a first set or so, so good job. All in all, I'd give it a 6/10 for the minor problems.

I'd also like to make a note on your card art. If you can get a free program like GIMP and a fitting background for each, it'd be a big help to you. Some members like to pound on that when they review. You can PM me if you'd like to but aren't sure how to do it.