My Goku Cards

[Ace_RKO_]

More cards to come inspired by Dragon Ball Z. These are my first cards, please comment and rate. Thank you.

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[Ace_RKO_]

Bump? I could use some feed back from some viewers.

[d3ath79]

I will make better versions, because I can.

[~Hero of Sky~Link]

The effects aren't that bad, but I have some feedback for you;

-Work on the backrounds they really were either too light, or possibly too dark, SS3 actually had a quite decent backround, just work on that

-The effects need a bit of work, and be careful about cazrd grammer!

That's it, other than that, good job

[Ace_RKO_]

[quote name='~Hero of Sky~Link' timestamp='1323890799' post='5706582']
The effects aren't that bad, but I have some feedback for you;

-Work on the backrounds they really were either too light, or possibly too dark, SS3 actually had a quite decent backround, just work on that

-The effects need a bit of work, and be careful about cazrd grammer!

That's it, other than that, good job
[/quote]

Thanks for the feedback! What kind of card grammar did I mess up?

[Elteddomaximus]

Goku - Super Saiyan
"During the turn this *car was destroyed", other then that there not bad.
Good idea I love DBZ homie, if i make some Vegeta card's do you care if i post them here???
You should maybe beef up the ATK of the set, Super Saiyan 3 2800/ATK Super Saiyan 2 2500/ATK Super Saiyan 1 too 2100/ATK and take Goku up to 1700/ATK. But i like the set, do you have any idea's for spell and traps yet??? Maybe Senzu Bean - Spell could special summon a Saiyan monster from the graveyard. Dragon Balls i guess could special summon a monster the same level as the # dragon ball, example 4 star dragon ball you can special summon one level 4 monster from your deck or graveyard. Haha just throwing some idea's your way buddy, I would like to help you finish the DBZ Saiyan set if you want any help bro.

Edit:
Vegeta - the Saiyan Prince
[img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9780/529306.jpg[/img]
Vegeta
[img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/9780/529306.jpg[/img]
Vegeta - Super Saiyan
[img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/9780/529306.jpg[/img]

Tell me what you think, i'm working on some more Vegeta's ill post them when i finish each one.

[Choji911]

Good job. Just the backgrounds kinda annoy me. But hey. Thats just me. Still good though.

[Ace_RKO_]

Here are my Vegeta variants.

[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/2945/427411.jpg[/img]


[img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/2945/427411.jpg[/img]


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I like to keep my cards in the spirit of the show.manga. I would hope that the effects of my cards fit with the personalities and the abilities of the actual characters in that show. if you disagree i would like to hear about it, though I would like to bring my points forward as to why each card has the effect that it does have.

[Ace_RKO_]

Bump?

[Ace_RKO_]

Bump.

[Xi-3]

I am uncertain about the immunities to attacks, traps, and spells. I tend to shy away from that kind of thing when they are combined, but then I'm also told my monsters have too much power. I would have made them a bit stronger as well, although I am well aware that [i]Dragonball[/i] is not one of the top-tier series as far as power is concerned.

Out of curiosity, how did Super Vegeta end up being a Dark-type when everyone else so far are Light-types?

What traits do your Saiyan-archetypes possess that makes them different from Warrior-types?

[orphan]

I kind of agree with Xi-3 on the saiyan archteypes things. What about Warrior/Saiyon or since saiyon would be a sub type of warrior and it fits the anime better. Given Vegeta's personality with the "anti goodguy" type, I would make them all dark but that is just me. The artwork on Vegeta, the Saiyon Prince is straight awesome and given the effects, the atk/def is balanced to componsate.
overall 8/10

[DickAnderson]

I can't choose I'm a huge Dragon Ball series fan, I grew up on them man.

[Ace_RKO_]

[quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1327586277' post='5781902']
I am uncertain about the immunities to attacks, traps, and spells. I tend to shy away from that kind of thing when they are combined, but then I'm also told my monsters have too much power. I would have made them a bit stronger as well, although I am well aware that [i]Dragonball[/i] is not one of the top-tier series as far as power is concerned.

Out of curiosity, how did Super Vegeta end up being a Dark-type when everyone else so far are Light-types?

What traits do your Saiyan-archetypes possess that makes them different from Warrior-types?
[/quote]

I had planned to make them all dark types. I must have messed up.

I made them "saiyan" types simply because I have an entire series planned out. Saiyans, Namekians, aliens, humans etc. and it makes a little bit more sense to me to make them all their own type so that they can have specific spell and trap cars.

For example, a card that would equip to a warrior would also equip to Krillin as well as Goku, but what if I want it to be specific to Saiyans and not humans?

I find it a bit easier for my archetype to work like that since I have a large number of cards planned and hpoefulyl soon it will make more sense as you guys get to see more of my collection

[orphan]

Hope you dont mind but I made a quick field card for the set.
[img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/5151/543101.jpg[/img]

[Xi-3]

It makes plenty of sense to me since I make my own types as well, as you can see from my own decks. Same as you, I wanted my cards to be able to affect others more selectively than normal. There are also certain things of which only custom archetypes are capable, which is why I asked what makes them different.

Avengers boost each other because they work together. Magisters and Ministers lend each other power through their Contracts. GN Gundam make it harder for older machines to operate because of their particles. It's that kind of thing. But unless you can explain this sort of thing, someone will have a connuption on you. Because of my recent experience with just such a thing I have determined that my Celestial Being set could be applied to a slightly altered, but nonetheless different, card game.

EDIT: Doesn't the moon make these guys transform (as long as they have their tails)?

[Ace_RKO_]

[quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1327637182' post='5783398']
It makes plenty of sense to me since I make my own types as well, as you can see from my own decks. Same as you, I wanted my cards to be able to affect others more selectively than normal. There are also certain things of which only custom archetypes are capable, which is why I asked what makes them different.

Avengers boost each other because they work together. Magisters and Ministers lend each other power through their Contracts. GN Gundam make it harder for older machines to operate because of their particles. It's that kind of thing. But unless you can explain this sort of thing, someone will have a connuption on you. Because of my recent experience with just such a thing I have determined that my Celestial Being set could be applied to a slightly altered, but nonetheless different, card game.

EDIT: Doesn't the moon make these guys transform (as long as they have their tails)?
[/quote]

That would be cool. Equip a Saiyan with a "tail" and get a great ape? That would be a neat little trick.

[quote name='Xi-3' timestamp='1327637182' post='5783398']
It makes plenty of sense to me since I make my own types as well, as you can see from my own decks. Same as you, I wanted my cards to be able to affect others more selectively than normal. There are also certain things of which only custom archetypes are capable, which is why I asked what makes them different.

Avengers boost each other because they work together. Magisters and Ministers lend each other power through their Contracts. GN Gundam make it harder for older machines to operate because of their particles. It's that kind of thing. But unless you can explain this sort of thing, someone will have a connuption on you. Because of my recent experience with just such a thing I have determined that my Celestial Being set could be applied to a slightly altered, but nonetheless different, card game.

EDIT: Doesn't the moon make these guys transform (as long as they have their tails)?
[/quote]

That would be cool. Equip a saiyan with a tail and special summon a great ape of some sort?

[orphan]

i thought about the monkey but couldnt decide how to make them transform in yugioh without fusion...... unless its a magic with an ape which increases attack and defense and change the "FULL MOON" effect to "While this card is on the field, you may play the magic card "GREAT APE". its a work in progess. maybe if youz want, we can build a saiyon yugioh deck lol

[Sicair22]

When Sayians look upon a full moon with a tail, they transform into Giant Apes, or Oozaru. Only Vegeta, as far as I know, can retain his intellect and remember what happened when he transforms. Other Sayians cannot remember what happens when they transform. Also, Vegeta can transform during daylight or when their is no moon by using a special energy attack.

[img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/8881/111521.jpg[/img]

Increase ATK by 100 for each "Goku, Hero of Earth", "Vegeta, Prince of Sayians", "Gohan, Son of a Hero", "Piccolo", "Super Sayian Goku", "Super Sayian Vegeta", "Super Sayian Gohan", "Trunks, Son of a Prince", and "Super Sayian Trunks" in your hand, and graveyard.

[img]http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/8881/111521.jpg[/img]

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This Monster can only be summoned from your Deck or Hand by Tributing "Gohan, Son of a Hero" on your side of the field. Monsters with 2000 or more ATK cannot destroy this card.

[orphan]

If Im not mistaken, Vegeta only retains his memory because he has learned to control it. Here is the fixed full moon and some other cards. I was going to do Ghost Nappa but someone already did back in 2011 and didn't put his name in it. I also didn't do saiyon tail because I couldn't find a pic I like and not a good artist. Hope everyone likes them.
[img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/5151/543101.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5151/543101.jpg[/img]
"FULL MOON" must be on the field. Place OOZARU over any saiyon, except a super saiyon, that has "SAIYON TAIL" equiped. When OOZARU is destroyed, destroy the saiyon this card is equipped to as well. If "FULL MOON" is destroyed, remove only this card from the game and reduce the attack and defense of the sayion by 500.
[img]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/5151/543101.jpg[/img]
"FULL MOON" must be on the field. This card may only be placed over a super saiyon with "SAIYON TAIL" equiped. If this monster is destroyed, remove it along with the saiyon this was equipped to from the game. If "FULL MOON" is destroyed, only remove this card from the game and reduce the attack and defense of the super saiyon this was equipped to by 700.

[Xi-3]

Is 'Saiyan' not spelled 'Saiyan?'

That's a long list on Broly's card. This is one reason I am starting to dislike OCG: you have to go about things the long way. It'd be much easier to say he gains power for every other Saiyan, wouldn't it?