Dark Summoning Gate

[Ruby_Mansi]

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Card [color=#000000]Lore: 3 Level 4 [/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"][color=#000000]Monsters[/color][/url]

[color=#000000]This cards summon cannot be negated. Once per turn you can remove one [/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?smt=Xyz"][color=#000000]xyz[/color][/url][color=#000000]material from this card to special summon the removed [/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"][color=#000000]monster[/color][/url][color=#000000] to your side of the [/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"][color=#000000]field[/color][/url][color=#000000]. All [/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"][color=#000000]monsters[/color][/url][color=#000000] special summoned by this card [/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"][color=#000000]effect[/color][/url][font="Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif"][size="2"][color="#000000"] gain 500 attack and defense points and cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card leaves the [/color][/size][/font][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"][color=#000000]field[/color][/url][color=#000000], all [/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"][color=#000000]monsters[/color][/url][color=#000000] special summoned by its [/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"][color=#000000]effect[/color][/url][color=#000000] [/color][color=#000000]are shuffled back into your deck, you gain 300 life points for each card shuffled back into your deck.[/color]

[~The Dark one~]

Overall its a good card with many good effects. The only one bad thing i think about this card is that it has an effect that may be OP. I mean the effect is super powerfull but then the cost for it is may be the only substitute for the OP effect.

[ragnarok1945]

well the LP gain might not be as much as you think, so I'm unsure for that part

the 500 atk/def gain part for the banished monster is fine for being permanent

however ANY banished monster is a bit too versatile, even if it's just the xyz material

you need to specify better the banished monster, otherwise combined with the cannot be destroyed it might be too much

[BFG Studios]

I really like it... to me, definitely seems like something new... OCG is a bit off, but that's ok, you can still make out what the effect is... still, heres the edited version:

[b]3 Level 4 monsters
This card's Xyz Summon cannot be negated. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon the detached Xyz Material to your side of the field as a monster. All monsters Special Summoned by this effect gain 500 ATK/DEF and c[size=4]anno[/size]t be destroyed by battle. When this card leaves the field: All monsters Special Summoned by this effect are shuffled back into your Deck; gain 300 Life Points for each card shuffled into your Deck.[/b]

Seems like a great idea, but a few parts could be OP'd... The 'cannot be negated' part and the monsters SS'd 'cannot be destroyed by battle' probably contribute to making it overpowered... so maybe work on those?
Overall, putting a few card errors aside, the effect seems good, but with it a little less powerful, it is still a good card
9/10