Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 overpowered? under powered? or balanced? O.O anyway hope you like it guys : [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/5089/332516m.jpg[/img] lore: if this card is tribute summoned using a "seraphinians" monster you can discard 2 cards from your hand; destroy 2 cards on the field. once per turn you can reveal 1 "betrayer of light -EVE" from your hand to negate the effect of a card that would destroy this card. [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/6003/332516k.jpg[/img] lore: if this card is in your hand you can discard this card with 1 "seraphinians" monster and target 1 card on your field; destroy the targeted card . monsters that battles with this card whose DEF points are lower than its ATK points are destroyed after the damage calculation. [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/1018/332516t.jpg[/img] lore: you can discard this card with 1 "seraphinians" monster and target 1 "seraphinians" monster on the field; increase the attack of the selected monster by 800 until the end phase of thisn turn. if this card is discarded either by effect or by cost destroy 1 card on the field. if this card is destroyed your opponent takes 500 damages. [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7021/332516.jpg[/img] lore: if this card is discarded from your hand to the graveyard either by cost or by effect, special summon 1 "seraphinians" monster from your deck. if this card is on the field and is destroyed your opponent takes 700 damage. [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5913/332516j.jpg[/img] lore: if this card is discarded from your hand to the graveyard either by cost or by effect destroy 1 card on the field. if this card is on the field and is destroyed you can special summon 1 "seraphinians" from your deck in attack position then your opponent takes 700 damage. [img]http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/7021/332516.jpg[/img] lore:if this card is discarded from your hand to the graveyard either by cost or by effect draw 1 card. if this card destroyed a monster in battle you can discard 1 card to allow this card to attack again. if this card is destroyed your opponent takes 500 damage. [img]http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/7021/332516.jpg[/img] lore: betrayer of light -EVE + 1 dark non tuner monster. once per turn you can discard one card from youre hand; destroy 1 card from each player's field. if this card is destroyed youre opponent takes 700 points of damages. if this card is in the graveyard you can discard 1 card or destroy 1 card on your field; banish this card then on your 2nd mainphase special summon this card banished that way. [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/7021/332516.jpg[/img] lore: if a "seraphinians" monster is discarded you can special summon it to your field. each time a "seraphinians" monster is destroyed your opponent takes 200 damage. if this card is destroyed your opponent takes 500 damage. RELATED: [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/7021/332516.jpg[/img] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/7021/332516.jpg[/img] OCG fix really appreciated.. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 for umbra, the 800 atk shouldn't be permanent and the 300 burn effect also seems a bit too small, make it 700 or something same with Yasha and Ua, 400 burn seems too small Ragedon's special summoning effect is a little bit too easy, make it harder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted December 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 ok uhmm so for umbra ill change it to "until the end phase" then ill increase their burn damages by 400 points .. for ragedon i dont know what to do? if i increase the number of the cards needed to be destroyed or discard then i think it will be overpowered.. o.O? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 well how many you intend to increase it by? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted December 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 how bout this: lore: betrayer of light -EVE + 1 dark non tuner monster. once per turn you can discard one card from youre hand; destroy 1 card from each player's field. if this card is destroyed youre opponent takes 700 points of damages. if this card is in the graveyard you can discard 1 card or destroy 1 card on your field; banish this card then on your 2nd mainphase special summon this card banished that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2011 Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 looks ok, though since you said about the special summoned card, perhaps put a slight restriction on that too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted December 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 uhmm O.O may i ask what is restriction ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted December 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2011 i think ill give this one a BUMP.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheluyang Peng Posted December 25, 2011 Report Share Posted December 25, 2011 there is already a dark attribute of fairies: Darklords. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted December 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2011 yes i know.. any problem about that?? o.O? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elteddomaximus Posted December 26, 2011 Report Share Posted December 26, 2011 [img]http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/9780/529306.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn you can un-equip this card from the equipped monster and summon it in face-up attack position, you can pay 800 life points to equip this monster to one face-up dark monster on the field. Increase the equipped monsters attack by 400 points each turn this card is equipped to the equipped monster. While this card is equipped to a face-up monster your opponent controls the control of the equipped monster is switched to the owner of this card. When you un-equip this card from the equipped monster, destroy the equipped monster and increase your life points by the destroyed monsters attack. I made this for a contest and never used it, but its a pretty strong card. I haven't really made any more stuff that goes with it tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted December 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2011 your card is nice.. why did you post it here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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