PokemonandRoblox Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 Here is my first set, I finished them this morning, hope you like them. [spoiler=Monster][spoiler=Mercury] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9130/245981v.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, add 1 "Animal Planet" monster to your hand, if this card is used for a Synchro or Xyz Summon, the summoned monster gains 500 Attack and Defence Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Venus] [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, select 1 "Animal Planet" monster in your hand, that monster's level is lowered by 1 until this card is removed from the field. If this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 1000 points of damage to both players.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Earth] [img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, Special Summon 1 "Moon Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in Defense Position. The "Moon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). This card gains Attack and Defence Points equal to the number of "Moon Tokens" on the field x1000.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Mars] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, Special Summon 2 "Moon Token"'s (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in Defense Position. The "Moon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). This card gains 500 Attack and Defence points for each "Animal Planet" and "Moon Token" monster on the field. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Jupiter] [img]http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, Special Summon up to 2 "Moon Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in Defense Position. The "Moon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). When this card is summoned, select 1 monster in your Graveyard, this card gains Attack and Defence Points equal to the number of stars on that monster X1000.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Saturn] [img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, Special Summon up to 2 "Moon Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in Defense Position. The "Moon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). On each of your Main Phase 1's, you can increase your Life Points equal to the number of "Moon Token"'s on the field, x200.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Uranus] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, Special Summon up to 2 "Moon Token" (Beast-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in Defense Position. The "Moon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). On each of your Standby Phases, you can tribute 1 "Moon Token" to have this card gain 500 Attack and Defence Points, if this cards Attack or Defence goes over 3000, destroy this card and the cards controller loses 3000 Life Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Neptune] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, Special Summon up to 1 "Moon Token" (Fish-Type/WATER/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in Defense Position. The "Moon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). If this card is summoned when their are no other monster on your side of the field (excluding tokens) Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Animal Planet" monster, from your hand or deck, in Defence Position. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Pluto] [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, Special Summon up to 1 "Moon Token" (Insect-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) in Defense Position. The "Moon Tokens" cannot be used as a Tribute for a Tribute Summon (or Set). If this card is used for a Tribute Summon, the summoned monster gains 100 Attack and Defence. The cards controller loses 1000 Life Points once the monster is summoned.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Sun (I know it isn't a planet, but it is still in the set)] [img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: If this card is summoned when a "Moon Token" is on the field, tribute 1 "Moon Token" and Special Summon 1 "Animal Planet" monster from your hand or Graveyard. Once per turn, you can add 1 "Animal Planet" monster from your deck to your hand, this card gains 1000 Attack and Defence Points for each "Animal Planet" monster on the field (excluding this monster).[/spoiler] [spoiler=The Star Keeper] [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/9130/245981v.jpg[/img] Lore: FLIP: When this card is flipped, you can Special Summon 1 "Animal Planet - Sun from your hand. The summoned monster gains 1000 Attack and Defence Points and it's effect is negated.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells][spoiler=Solar System] [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn on your, you can Tribute up to 2 "Moon Token"'s to have this card gain 2 Moon Counters (Max. 10). You can remove up to 10 Moon Counters to have all "Animal Planet" monsters gain Attack and Defence Points equal to the number of counters removed, x100.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Born from the Galaxy] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: Select 1 "Animal Planet" monster in your hand and Special Summon it in Defence Position. It's effect is negated and it is sent to your hand at the End Phase.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Death of a Star: Explosion] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: Select 1 "Animal Planet" monster you control, tribute that monster and you gain Life Points equal to that monsters level, x100.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps][spoiler=The Big Bang] [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate this card only when a monster is summoned, destroy all cards on the field and both players lose 2000 Life Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=White Cold Galaxy] [img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/2066/245981g.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is activated, all monsters on the field, apart from "Animal Planet" monsters, are changed to Defence Position and they cannot change their Battle Position unless with a card effect. On the 2nd turn after this card is activated, destroy this card and the affected cards return to their normal positions.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Death of a Star: Implosion] [img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: Destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field, both players takes 500 direct damage for each Spell or Trap Card destroyed.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Death of a Star: Black Hole] [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/2120/245981.jpg[/img] Lore: Destroy all "Animal Planet" and "Moon Tokens" you control, your opponent takes 500 direct damage for each monster destroyed.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=New Cards (Lores will be in their respective Area's)] [img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/2120/245981.jpg[/img] [img]http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2120/245981.jpg[/img] [img]http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/4381/245981q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/2066/245981g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/5641/245981f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/2120/245981.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowtiger Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 I really like these, I love the pics and the strategy all I can say is create some sort of destruction engine to be used with the moon tokens as you fill your field very quickly but can't get rid of them, possibly even change it so they can only be tributed for animal planet monsters and then just lower the number of tokens summoned but still I love the concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokemonandRoblox Posted December 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 [quote name='snowtiger' timestamp='1324640644' post='5725027'] I really like these, I love the pics and the strategy all I can say is create some sort of destruction engine to be used with the moon tokens as you fill your field very quickly but can't get rid of them, possibly even change it so they can only be tributed for animal planet monsters and then just lower the number of tokens summoned but still I love the concept [/quote] Thank you, I will take that idea on-board, I will update the cards shortly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 for venus, you can make the burn bigger, 200 is virtually nothing for Earth, at least the tokens can still be used for synchro food, so that's good though for both Earth and Mars they're a bit boring for not having much but atk determining effects for Sun, it's Winged Beast for the type, not Winged-Beast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokemonandRoblox Posted December 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 The cards have been updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 they look better now you going to add more later? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokemonandRoblox Posted December 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 Hopefully I will, possibly some more support cards and a synchro maybe. I am going to be very busy tomorrow helping my dad out with the cooking (making brownies for X-Mas Dinner) I will make some tonight if I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 right, right, you just let us know when you do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokemonandRoblox Posted December 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 I have finished making some more, I am just trying to figure out how to hide them. :/ Edit: figured it out now, the thread should look more professional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2011 Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 right, where is the NEW so we know which ones you added? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokemonandRoblox Posted December 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 Oh sorry, I will make a spoiler where the new cards will be. Edit: New bit added for new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowtiger Posted December 24, 2011 Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 After reading back through the cards I realized Jupiter has some OCG that needs fixing. Instead of the last line it should be: "When this card is Summoned, target 1 monster in your Graveyard, This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the Level of the targeted monster x 1000". I saw that you've added a destruction engine for the moon tokens as well, great work. I could see some support cards being made that uses the moon counters or even the tokens as costs for effects, for instance, the field spell Solar System could have the effect that stops your opponent from attacking if they have a certain level limit like any monster with a level equal to or lower cannot attack then make an end phase sacrifice like "tribute 1 counter from this card or destroy it". Creating a lock strategy archetype. Just some suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 24, 2011 Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 for Star Keeper, I'd make the 1000 atk/def gain last only 1 turn, and the effect negation last 1 turn as well same with Born from the Galaxy. Since it's going to be sent to your hand during the end phase anyway, why negate the effects? Explosion is meh, the LP gain might not really be too much, better if gained 300 per level instead see Black Hole is much better, it has a better burn and the same goes with the Implosion trap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokemonandRoblox Posted December 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 I thank you all for your criticism. I will update these when I can since it is late where I live and Christmas is tomorrow. Thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 25, 2011 Report Share Posted December 25, 2011 so can we expect an update by the 26th or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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