Oking cole Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/617/282416.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklord Draxon Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 Well it is a decent monster, it is like monster reborn. This card is kinda confusing cuz there is 2 things that bother me. 1: Which Main Phase does the effect activate? cuz there are 2 Main Phases. There is Main Phase 1 and then Main Phase 2 which is after the Battle Phase. 2: If you are Special Summoning a monster, is it from either player's Graveyard or just your own? But i give this card a 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oking cole Posted December 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 eithers graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 given that effect I see no reason for this being lv10, you can make it lv8 instead though it's still considered OPed because it's a continuous form of Monster Reborn also as said from above, indicate if you meant Main Phase 1 or Main Phase 2 otherwise it'll get way too confusing...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FindingTheEverlight Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 There is something called a shift button, but never the less, it is a bit o/p'd because there is no cost to the effect, and as Ragna said, it is a continuous Monster Reborn, so chances are, with a card this broken, it would be banned. You also need to be specific on which Graveyard, whether it's yours, your opponent's, or both. But, I will say, it has a cool picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 also you misspelled fiend in the type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted December 24, 2011 Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 Seems balanced enough since it can get run over pretty easily but it does have a very powerful effect. Nice picture. Also; Learning proper grammar makes you happier, seriousley, not lying. Fixes; [b]Name:[/b][i] Zortak the Knight of Shadows[/i] [b]Effect: [/b][i]During the end of your Main Phase 1 you can select 1 monster in either players Graveyard; Special Summon it.[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lets_all_CLAM_DOWN Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 I think its ok but a little confusing. The effect should sounds a little something like this Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can special summon one monster form either player's Graveyard. Plus you should add a cost Hope that helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 [quote name='Octavia' timestamp='1324689265' post='5726221'] Seems balanced enough since it can get run over pretty easily but it does have a very powerful effect. Nice picture. Also; Learning proper grammar makes you happier, seriousley, not lying. Fixes; [b]Name:[/b][i] Zortak the Knight of Shadows[/i] [b]Effect: [/b][i]During the end of your Main Phase 1 you can select 1 monster in either players Graveyard; Special Summon it.[/i] [/quote] [b][color=#000066]Lets_all_CLAM_DOWN, what part of this didn't you read? Your OCG is old.[/color][/b] [color=#000066][b]ITT: Level 8 fits better, lower atk to 2300ish and change to Octavia's effect.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]EDIT: Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1: You may discard one card; Target one monster in either player's Graveyard and Special Summon it.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]That's newer OCG I think, with balance. New OCG with all those : and ; are so confusing. :/[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oking cole Posted December 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 dont moan about grammar thanks for other suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 You posted a card in the Realistic section. If you made grammar mistakes, it's a flaw and we're just trying to make it more realistic. So don't moan about constructive criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 if this does become a real card it'll probably be banned seeing how monster re is limited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 IMO rather than add a cost you should give it a type or attribute restriction and make it just from your grave. That would make it less OPed then REDMD since that can be easily special summoned whilst this cannot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oking cole Posted April 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2012 soz for the post about not complainig at grammar i was having a crap day and my grammars crap on the best of days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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