Alex Rea Posted December 24, 2011 Report Share Posted December 24, 2011 [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/6832/533653.jpg[/img][img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/6832/533653.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can only be Ritual Summoned by using the Spell card "Blue Mirror". When this card is Ritual Summoned successfully, you can Special Summon 1 "Captain Flynn Stud" from your Extra Deck ignoring summoning conditions. "Captain Flynn Stud" cannot attack or activate it's effect until your second standby phase if summoned this way. [img]http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/6832/533653.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted December 25, 2011 Report Share Posted December 25, 2011 It seems playable, although 9 stars for 2600 ATK and a simple effect cancel seems meh. Your OCG is pretty good, a bit off, but good. Unfortunately I'm not a master so I'm not sure of the correction. 8/10. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Rea Posted December 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2011 Well the effect is simple but it is relative to what my friend always says when we duel negate. The card is based on him. So what would u suggest be his Atk. And any other things you think i should fix.? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fenrir Wolferion Posted December 25, 2011 Report Share Posted December 25, 2011 nice card is it?? guess i will try to make ritual monster too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rivenroth Posted December 25, 2011 Report Share Posted December 25, 2011 Now that we have the ritual card, I'ma have to change up what I said. Maybe bring his ATK up to 2700, maybe. xD Anyway, onto the ritual... Two heavy hitters in one go, and considering the cancelled effect on the ritual for Flynn, seems balanced. My rating still stands at 8/10. As for more fixes, try to perfect your OCG. It's not really a big deal, but it's really the only thing I can tell you as far as fixes go. I'm not a pro though, so people are probably going to disagree with me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Rea Posted December 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2011 Thanks. I am working on my OCG. I am not a pro either but I am trying to do my best. I will probably be posting some more cards soon. I am making this into a set DPAR i have to other cards one being from the anime Rosario+Vampire and the other from Vampire Knight. If you look at those I would much appreciate your commentary. And thank you for your comments so far. I am hoping to possibly develop some cards to work together with the 2 Captains. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace9Brine Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 a little ocg errors like stars instead of level but good cards. captin FS should be level 8 or 7 overall good cards! 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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